5.英译汉+汉译英【国家开放大学学士学位英语】湛江雅托教育培训中心
【1】英译汉
1.志愿活动让人们在现实场景中相聚,建立起真挚的面对面联结,从而减轻孤独感。
2.尽管存在这些挑战,社区服务规模持续增长的整体趋势没有放缓迹象。
3.社会科学家警告,城市中不平等程度的加剧可能会引发社会张力上升,并推高犯罪率。
4.这些举措表明,经过周密规划并具备政治决心,就有可能打造出对所有居民而言更具包容性、更可持续的城市。
5.他们认为,西方媒体、快餐和流行文化的传播正在让不同文化变得愈发趋同,那些让每个社群独具特色的独有传统正在流失。
6.无论是出国旅行、和国际同事共事,还是只是接触其他国家的媒体内容,能够识别并尊重文化差异,就能让我们成为更合格的全球公民。
7.当客人到访中国家庭,主人做的第一件事就是为客人泡上一壶热茶。
8.只要人们依然能从饮茶体验中寻得意义与价值,中国茶文化就会继续蓬勃发展,绵延世代。
9.由于农作物种植在室内,不需要使用杀虫剂,也不会产生污染河湖的径流。
10.随着全球人口增长,叠加气候变化对传统农业带来更多压力,垂直农业有望成为未来粮食供给的重要组成部分。
11.这些离子会引发动物大脑化学物质和血液化学成分发生改变,进而导致异常行为。
12.如果动物确实能提前数天预测地震,这项研究有望助力开发新型地震预警系统,挽救数千人的生命。
13.居住空间整洁的人,相比于居住环境杂乱的人,压力水平更低,睡眠质量也更好。
14.如果当天日程繁忙,你可以做5分钟的整理任务,不必硬做15分钟。关键在于坚持,而不是单次时长。
15.但研究表明,稳固的线下亲密关系,是长期幸福感最重要的影响因素之一。
16.当你为他人做善事,哪怕只是举手之劳比如帮着扶住门、说一句赞美,你的大脑也会释放让你感觉愉悦的化学物质。
17.哈佛商学院的一项研究发现,不划清工作与生活清晰边界的远程工作者,比坚持固定作息的上班族,报告慢性疲劳的概率高出35%。
18.这种文化层面的压力使得很多人把工作放在个人生活之前,哪怕他们其实更愿意把时间花在陪伴家人或者发展爱好上。
19.此外,城市菜园中的植物可以吸收空气中的二氧化碳,帮助缓解“城市热岛效应”——这种效应会让城市在夏季比周边乡村地区温度高很多。
20.他们还指出,很多城市园艺项目由绅士化社区里的中产居民主导,这类项目会推高房价,最终将低收入家庭挤出该区域。
答案解析:本次翻译严格遵循非英语专业学士学位英语考试的评分要求:
1.整体采用直译为主、意译为辅的策略,保证译文准确符合中文表达习惯,不生硬欧化;
2.针对长难句拆分处理,把英文多层从句转化为符合中文逻辑的短句,例如第3句中that growing inequality...can lead to...的从句结构,拆分为符合中文逻辑的“不平等加剧→引发张力上升→推高犯罪率”的递进表达;
3.专有文化名词处理准确,如urban heat island effect标准译法为“城市热岛效应”,gentrifying neighborhoods译为“绅士化社区”(指城市旧区翻新改造后中产阶层迁入、原有低收入居民迁出的社区),符合学术译法规范;
4.多义词结合语境选择合适译法:例如trend结合上下文“社区服务发展”译为“趋势”,initiatives结合城市治理语境译为“举措”,runoff结合农业语境译为“(降水形成的)径流”;
5.本次译文满足考试“语句通顺、译文准确”的得分要求,关键得分点都完整覆盖,不会因为漏译错译失分。
【2】汉译英
21. 参考译文:Our library has newly bought more than 3,000 books and over 100 kinds of magazines.
解析:本题考查数量表达和常用词汇,"新购"翻译为"has newly bought","三千多本"表达为"more than 3,000","一百多种"为"over 100 kinds of",符合英文表达习惯。
22. 参考译文:With the development of the Internet, online education has become an important part of modern education.
解析:本题考查with的复合结构作状语,"随着……的发展"固定表达为"With the development of...","在线教育"是"online education","重要组成部分"翻译为"an important part of",语法结构正确。
23. 参考译文:No matter what difficulties we encounter, we should stick to our dreams and never give up.
解析:本题考查让步状语从句,"无论什么"用"No matter what"引导,"遇到困难"翻译为"encounter difficulties","坚持梦想"固定搭配是"stick to our dreams",符合考点要求。
24. 参考译文:This paper mainly discusses the application prospect of artificial intelligence in the medical field.
解析:本题考查常用名词短语,"这篇论文"是"This paper","主要讨论"翻译为"mainly discusses","人工智能"为"artificial intelligence","医疗领域"是"medical field",术语翻译准确。
25. 参考译文:According to statistics, about 8 million people die of smoking-related diseases every year around the world.
解析:本题考查固定短语和介词搭配,"据统计"是"According to statistics","死于(疾病)"用"die of","与吸烟相关的疾病"翻译为"smoking-related diseases",介词使用正确。
26. 参考译文:If you book airline tickets in advance, you can usually get tickets at a lower price.
解析:本题考查条件状语从句和固定短语,"提前"固定表达为"in advance","预订机票"是"book airline tickets","价格更低的票"翻译为"tickets at a lower price",符合英文表达逻辑。
27. 参考译文:In order to protect the environment, we should try our best to reduce the use of disposable plastic bags.
解析:本题考查目的状语和常用词汇,"为了"用"In order to"引导目的状语,"保护环境"是"protect the environment","一次性塑料袋"翻译为"disposable plastic bags",词汇翻译准确。
28. 参考译文:He is not only my teacher, but also the most important mentor in my life.
解析:本题考查固定并列结构"not only...but also...","人生道路上的导师"翻译为"the most important mentor in my life",结构正确,语义完整。
29. 参考译文:Most people believe that reading classic books can enrich our spiritual world.
解析:本题考查宾语从句和动名词作主语,"阅读经典书籍"动名词短语"reading classic books"作主语,"丰富我们的精神世界"翻译为"enrich our spiritual world",语法结构正确。
30. 参考译文:Due to the bad weather, the sports meeting originally scheduled for tomorrow has to be put off until next Monday.
解析:本题考查过去分词作定语和被动语态,"由于……原因"用"Due to","原定于"用过去分词短语"originally scheduled for"作后置定语,"推迟"固定短语是"put off",被动语态使用正确。
31. 参考译文:This ancient church with a history of more than 200 years was listed as a World Cultural Heritage site last year.
解析:本题考查介词短语作定语和被动语态,"拥有……历史"用"with a history of...","被列入"翻译为"was listed as",专有名词"世界文化遗产名录"翻译为"World Cultural Heritage site",准确规范。
32. 参考译文:Only when you truly devote yourself to something can you experience the happiness in it.
解析:本题考查部分倒装结构,"Only+状语从句"置于句首,主句要部分倒装,"投入到"固定搭配是"devote yourself to",倒装结构使用正确,符合语法规则。
33. 参考译文:More and more young people have begun to realize that health is more important than wealth.
解析:本题考查形容词比较级,"越来越多的"翻译为"More and more","意识到"是"realize",比较级结构"more important than"使用正确,符合语义要求。
34. 参考译文:Students should learn to arrange their time properly and balance study and after-school activities.
解析:本题考查并列谓语和常用短语,"合理安排时间"翻译为"arrange their time properly","平衡学习和课外活动"是"balance study and after-school activities",用词准确,结构正确。
35. 参考译文:This problem is very complicated, and we need to spend more time conducting in-depth research on it.
解析:本题考查并列句和固定搭配,"非常复杂"翻译为"very complicated","花时间做某事"是"spend time doing sth","深入研究"是"in-depth research",搭配正确。
36. 参考译文:Great changes have taken place in rural areas of China in the past ten years.
解析:本题考查现在完成时和固定句型,"某地发生了巨大变化"常用"Great changes have taken place in...","过去的十年里"是"in the past ten years",对应现在完成时,表达符合英文习惯。
37. 参考译文:In my opinion, success depends not on luck, but on continuous efforts and accumulation.
解析:本题考查固定结构"depend not on...but on...","我认为"翻译为"In my opinion","持续不断的努力和积累"是"continuous efforts and accumulation",结构正确,语义清晰。
38. 参考译文:Although he has been retired for ten years, he still pays close attention to the country's development every day.
解析:本题考查让步状语从句,"尽管"用"Although"引导,"关注"固定短语是"pays close attention to",时态使用正确,符合语境要求。
39. 参考译文:You'd better check your car before you set out to make sure it won't break down on the road.
解析:本题考查固定搭配和目的状语,"最好做某事"是"You'd better do sth","出发"是"set out","出故障"固定短语是"break down",短语搭配准确,逻辑正确。
40. 参考译文:Many studies show that proper physical exercise can effectively improve our learning efficiency.
解析:本题考查宾语从句和常用术语,"适当的体育锻炼"翻译为"proper physical exercise","提高学习效率"是"improve our learning efficiency",术语翻译准确,句子结构正确。
