写作强化-大学英语六级

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of social responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题引导
三套题目要求说明“拥有社会/集体/家庭责任感的重要性”,主体虽然不同,但核心都在于“责任心/感的重要意义”。开篇可先做铺垫,引入责任感的定义或简要铺陈论述背景(如有关责任感的正面或反面热议事件),也可以开门见山,从各自主体(企业、个人/社区居民、群体或团队成员/家长、子女等)切入,直陈结论;主体段应阐述其具体意义所在。
写作提纲
第一段:以“社会问题”的普遍性引出社会责任感的缺失。
第二段:分别从企业和个人角度阐述社会责任感的重要性:
①(正面)事实:好的企业盈利之余不忘社会责任;
②说理:拥有社会责任感对个人意义重大:激发学习与实践;规范个人行为。
第三段:总结观点,发出呼吁。
下笔成文
Problems such as the violation of privacy and environmental pollution are becoming increasingly prevalent in modern society. To some extent, they can be ascribed to a distinct lack of a sense of social responsibility among enterprises and individuals, which is of crucial importance in building a better world.
When seeking profits, socially responsible corporations never forget to make positive contributions to our society. Take Alibaba, a leading tech company in China. The Ant Forest green initiative it launched in 2016 has so far inspired up to 500 million Alipay users to adopt low-carbon lifestyles and resulted in over 100 million trees planted in China’s most barren regions. At the individual level, a sense of social responsibility motivates us college students to acquire as much knowledge as possible and put it into practice. It also prevents us from engaging in unethical behaviors such as campus violence and academic misconduct that cause negative social impacts.
To sum up, a healthy society requires all its members to take on their respective responsibilities. Everyone, therefore, should develop a sense of social responsibility, especially we college students who will be a pillar of society in the future.
翻译
侵犯隐私、环境污染等问题在现代社会正变得越发普遍。从某种程度上讲,它们可以归咎于企业与个人社会责任感的明显缺失,而这种责任感对于建设一个更美好的世界至关重要。
有社会责任感的企业在追求利润的同时,从不会忘记对我们的社会做出积极贡献。中国科技龙头企业阿里巴巴就是一例。该公司2016年发起的“蚂蚁森林”环保行动截至目前让多达5亿支付宝用户养成了低碳的生活习惯,并在中国最贫瘠的地区种下了1亿多棵树。从个人层 面上讲,社会责任感能激发我们大学生掌握尽可能多的知识并将其付诸实践的积极性。它还能防止我们参与到诸如校园暴力和学
术不端等会造成负面社会影响的不道德行为中。
总之,健全的社会有赖于每一位成员承担各自的责任。因而,每个人都应该培养社会责任感,特别是我们这些未来作为社会中坚力量的大学生。