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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

首段：改写

The pie chart indicates destination of Anthropology graduates from a university after their undergraduate degree course that is finished. And the table displays salaries of Anthropology graduates after 5 years’ work.

第二段：图一的数据比较与对比（从大到小或从小到大描述）

As can be seen from the pie chart，the full-time work whose percentage accounts for 52% ranks the first place，which was followed by the part-time work with 15% was 3% more than unemployment. Additionally，the percentage of full-time postgraduate study was the same as that of unknown subject occupying 8%. It is noticeable that the smallest percentage depends on the part-time work plus postgrad study holding 5%.

第三段：图二的数据比较与对比

According to the salaries of Anthropology graduates after 5 years’ work，the income of ＄25000-49999 and ＄50000-74999 seizes similar percentage for the freelance consultants and government sector with 5% and 15% respectively. Moreover， 30% of government sector is 10% less than that of freelance consultants for 75000-99999. In addition，40% and 50% for the freelance consultants and the government sector was witnessed in the income of 100000⁺ where the private companies dominate the percentage with 30%. Besides，10%，35% and 25% are seen for the private companies with ＄25000-49999，＄50000-74000 and ＄75000-99999 respectively.

结尾段：不要出现数据的变化

To sum up，the largest destination of Anthropology graduates focuses on the full-time work from one university，while the highest salary is gained for the government sector after 5 years’ work .