雅思12Test 5写作Task 1

The bar chart柱状图，the pie chart饼状图，the line graph曲线图，the table表格

the boy who does sth=the boy doing sth

被动语态be+过去分词（高分结构）

.....，which can promote the level.= ......，promoting the level.

As can be seen from the bar chart，...【如图柱状图所示，......】

...........in+地点/领域+where+从句...【.........，这...........】

........in+时间+从句........【..........，这时候..........】

上升/下降{动词}“到to”；上升/下降{名词}“到with”

上升/下降{动词}“了by”；上升/下降{名词}“了of”

a/the increase（名词） with（到） 20%；increased（动词） to（到） 20%

上升了the increase of 20%；increased by 20%

It is noticeable that+从句....（如果过去的时间用过去/现在的时间用现在）【值得注意的是......】

首段：改写题目

The bar chart illustrates ...【柱状图说明了/显示了.......】=The bar char shows...

The bar chart illustrates men and women whose percentage was in various age groups doing physical activity regularly in the year of 2010.

第二段：动态变化（数据变化）+静态比较（数据比较）【Men】数据变化

As can be seen from the bar chart，the percentage of men who did ragular physical activity from 15 to 24 years old with 52.8% decreased significantly to 39.5%（35 to 40）in Australia where the gradual increase was witnessed at 46.7% which displayed the age group of 65 and over in 2010. It is noticeable that people doing physical activity regularly dominated the highest percentage in the group aging from 15 to 24 who were 13.3% more than 35 to 44.

第三段：动态变化（数据变化）+静态比较（数据比较）【Women】数据变化

According to the bar chart，those who were seen with the group from 15 to 24 accounting for 47.7% experienced an abrupt growth of 5.6%（45-54），while the percentage indicated a downward trend with 47.1% in the group aging 65 and more in 2010 when we can see the lowest level that depended on the same aging group.

结尾段：总结概括--男女比较（不要出现数据）

To sum up，the percentage of females was much more than that of males，doing regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.