雅思图表写作2025.1.21

The line graph曲线图，the bar chart柱状图，the pie chart饼状图，the table表格

The graph shows the rates of smoking in men and women in the UK from 1960 to 2000.

首段：改写【写出相同相近的句子】

The graph shows=1.The line graph displays...【曲线图显示了......】

the rates of smoking in men and women in the UK from 1960 to 2000意思相同

the proportion of...=2.the rate of...

smoking in men and women=3.those who smoke

in the UK=in United Kingdom

from 1960 to 2000=4.over a span 40 years between 1996 and 2000

首段范文：

1.The line graph displays 2.the rate of 3.those who smoke 4.over a span 40 years between 1996 and 2000.

第二段：

句式：

1.As can be seen from the line graph，+句子....【如曲线图所示，........】

2.主语+whose proportion dominated+数据+in+年份+suffered from a downward trend with +数据+in+年份.【......他的比例占据......在.....时候显示下降的趋势为......】

3.It is obvious that the proportion of...for+对象+was almost twice more than that of...【明显的是，对于.....来说，......的比例几乎是......的两倍。】

4.Although the proportion that occupied the lowest point at+数据+in+时间，the significant increase was witnessed with for+对象+数据+in+时间.【尽管最低点比例为......在......时候，但是极大程度上升的数据为......在......时候到......时候。】

5.After that，+句子.....【之后，.....】

6...demonstrated the stable trend that led the level of+数据+during the period between+年份+and +年份+when+主语+soared considerably to the peak at+数据+in+时间，while declining gradually to the point at+数据+in+时间。【......显示平稳的趋势数据为......在......时间和......时间期间，这时候......极大程度上升到最高点数据为......在......时候，然而逐步下降到数据为.....在......时候。】

7.Clearly，the proportion of...was ... more than that of....【清晰的是，......的比例是.....的比例的多......。】

范文：

1.As can be seen from the line graph，2.the men whose proportion dominated 600‰ in 1960 suffered from a downward trend with approximately 300‰ in 2000. 3.It is obvious that the proportion of 1960 for the men was almost twice more than that of 2000. 4.Although the proportion that occupied the lowest point at only 100‰ in 1960，the significant increase was witnessed for the women with about 200‰ in 1970. 5.After that，6the proportion of women demonstrated the stable trend that led the level of roughly 210‰ during the period between 1965 and 1970 when it soared considerably to the peak at 310‰ in1975，while declining gradually to the point at 225‰ in 2000.7.Clearly，the proportion of 1960 was 125‰ more than that of 2000.

结尾段：

To sum up，the proportion of...was much more than that of...，who+谓语....in+国家+from+年份+to+年份.【总而言之，......的比例比是......的比例多得多，他们......在......地方从......时候到......时候。】

范文：

To sum up，the proportion of the men was much more than that of the women，who smoked in the UK from 1960 to 2000.