雅思写作作业2025.1.19
雅思大作文
首段：背景+改写+引入下文
In recent years，much more attention than ever before has been paid to...【最近几年，跟以前相比，人们将更多的注意力放在......的上。（背景）】However，there is much controversy over whether +从句...【然而，是否.....一直存在备受争论。（改写题目）】Personally，this essay will compare and contrast its benefits and drawbacks.【我认为，着脸问生长对比并比较他的好处和缺点。】
第二段：
One of the main...of...is to +动词动宾结构...，which+谓语+宾语...【一个主要的.....是.....，这......。Providing that+从句...，+主句......【如果......，......】With the presence of...，...is able to...，such as...，and thereby make a wiser ...decision.【有了.......的存在，......能够......，例如，......，由此做出更明智的......的决定。】Although+从句...，+主句...because+从句...【尽管......，但是.......因为......】
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Meanwhile，.....can.....and contribute to...in that+从句...【同时，......能够......并有利于......因为......】句子...in such an impressive way and with adding so many ...appeals that it always succeeds in +动名词...and promoting....【用给人印象深刻的方式......并增添许多......的吸引，以至于经常可以成功的......并促进......。】Only in the right way can...obtain...and help the development of...【只有通过正确的方式......能获得......并有利于......的发展。】
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Despite its importance，there is no denying that+从句...，thereby causing...（不良影响）【尽管如此重要，但无可置疑的是，.......，从而导致......。】It is a shared convention in the...that+主语+can be highlighted while the others can be simplified.【.......有一个共同的传统，即能够突出......，而对其他的轻描淡写。】主语，when+从句......，will be highly desired by many，as people can ignore the drawbacks that+从句...【当.......时候，......会受很多人赞成，因为人们可能忽视了缺点那就是......】It accounts for why +从句...，finding out that+从句...【这解释了为什么......】......is/are among those standard examples，doing sth a lot but achieving desirable outcomes.【......是其中一些电信的例子，做某事却不能达到满意的效果。】
结尾段：
In conclusion，...plays an essential role in the modern society where we live，not only doing sth but also doing sth，while...should beware of the misleading nature of...，cultivating good behavior of...【总而言之，在当今的社会，......扮演这重要的角色，不仅做某事二七二做某事，然而......应该意识到.......的误导性，从而培养良好的......的行为。】
作业：
【NO.1】
WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
作业
【NO.2】
WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
