新编雅思写作第2—7页【湛江雅托高分教材】
Introduction进行“重述”
柱状图显示了三个国家在1950到2050年间的人口变化，而表格揭示了同期的 公民平均年龄的变化。
The bar chart shows the population changes in three countries between 1950 and 2050 and the table reveals the citizens' average ages during the same period.
The bar chart shows+宾语...【柱状图显示了....】
the population changes in...【关于......的人口变化】
the table reveals+宾语...【表格揭示了...】
■ Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述一 ”
在三个国家之中，中国有着最明显的人口增长。
Among the three countries,it is obvious that China had the most dramatic increase in population.【among....（三者或以上之中），两者between...and...】
Among+宾语（介词+宾）...【状语】，it is obvious that +从句...【在......之中，明显的是，......】
had the most dramatic increase in...【关于......有着最明显增长】{增长幅度极大}【have（had）=experience=hold（held过去式）】
■ Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述二”
1950年时，中国只有2亿人口，而50年后，中国人口激增到10亿，是过去的五 倍 。
In 1950,there were only 200 million people in China;however（然而）, 50 years later,its population rose sharply急剧地 to 1000 million,five times of the previous（之前） level.
In+时间，were only+主语【在.....时候，只有......（倒装句）】
主语+rose sharply to...，...times of A【...激增到....，是A的多少倍】
■ Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述三”
另外，根据预测，在2050年，中国人口将达到令人瞠目结舌的14亿。
Moreover,it is projected that the population in China will reach（谓语：将来时态） an astonishing惊人的1400 million in 2050.
Moreover,it is projected that+从句...【另外，根据预测，...】
主语+状语+谓语+宾语...（状语介词引导就是状语）
reach an astonishing...【达到瞠目结舌的......】
■ Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述四”
相比之下，其他两个国家的人口变化就远非如此激烈。根据人口学的预测，美 国人口在2050年将攀升到7亿，而西班牙人口在2000年增加到1亿，在2050 年将回落到大约6千万。
In contrast,population changes in the other two countries are far less drastic, with the United States climbing to almost 700 million in 2050 and Spain growing to 100 million in 2000 and returning to nearly 60 million in 2050,both according to demographic人口学 predictions.
In contrast , the population changes in......are far less drastic，with+宾语+ climbing to almost+数据...and +宾语+growing to ...and returning to nearly+数据，both according to ...prediction.【相比之下，关于...的人口变化远非如此激烈，根据......的预测，......攀升到大约......，而......增长到....，并回落到将近......】
■ Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述一 ”
在人们的平均年龄方面，我们再次见证了中国的巨大增长。
In terms of the average ages of people,it is in China again that we witness α substantial growth.
In terms of the average... of A ，it is in...again that we witness a substantial growth.【就的平均......而言，我们再次见证了......的巨大增长。】
■ Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述二”
1950年时的中国人平均年龄仅仅为65岁，是当时三个国家之中最低的。而一 个世纪以后，该数字将跃居榜首，达到83岁。
In 1950,Chinese people's average age was only 65 years,the lowest among the three countries,while a century later that figure is expected to become the highest—83 years.
A was/were only...，the lowest among...，while +时间段+later that figure is expected to become the highest —...【A仅仅为......，是......之中最低的，然而.....以后，该数字将跃居榜首，达到......】
■ Main Body 2 对人口的平均年龄进行“描述三”
相比之下，美国公民的平均年龄并没有多少变化：1950年时是73岁，2000年时 增加到75岁，而到了2050年将略微下降到74岁。
In comparison,American citizen's average age shows little variation:it stood at 73 years in 1950,increased to 75 years in 2000 and will decrease slightly to 74 years in 2050.
In comparison , A shows little variation：it stood at...，increased to...and will decrease slightly to...【相比之下，A并没有多少变化：它是......，增加到......，而将略微下降到......】
■ Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述四”
与中国的情况相似，西班牙人口的平均年龄从1950年的70岁稳步增长到2000 年的72岁，并将在2050年达到77岁。
Similar to the situation in China,Spanish people's average age grew steadily from 70 to 72 years between 1950 and 2000 and is going to reach 77 years in
2050.
Similar to the situation in ... , A grew steadily from...to...and is going to reach...【与......的情况相似，A从......稳步增长到......，并将达到.......】
■ Conclusion 揭示出“总体规律”及其意义
三个国家(特别是中国和西班牙)人口平均年龄呈现出上升趋势的总体规律表 明了在它们的社会中将出现越来越高比例的老年人，以及年轻人数量将萎缩。
In conclusion,the general trend that people's average ages in all three countries,especially（特别是） China and Spain,are on the rise indicates that there will be an increasingly越来越 large proportion of senior citizens and a shrinking number of（......的萎缩）young people in their societies.
In conclusion,the general trend that A is/are on the rise indicates that there will be an increasingly largest proportion of...and a shrinking number of...【总而言之，A呈现出上升趋势的总体规律表明越来越高比例的......，以及......的数量将萎缩。】
