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高一英语写作学习【1】

2020-08-29

假定你是李华,在春节期间的家宴或朋友聚会中,你发现很多人沉迷于手机,不与他人沟通。请你向校英文报社编辑写信,反映该情况,要点包括:

1你遇到的情况

2.你的想法

3.你的建议。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

 

during(在......期间);the spring festival春节;at(在......{聚餐、晚会、宴会、聚会}); the family feasts家宴;friends parties朋友聚会;find发现v.-found{过去式}be addicted to...(沉迷于......);smartphones手机;give sb a response与某人沟通;editor编辑{}I am writing to tell you that+从句{主语+谓语...}...(我写信告诉你......);When+从句{主语+谓语...}...+主句{主语+谓语...}......(当......时候,......);I found that+从句{主语+谓语...}...(我发现......);Though/Although+从句{主语+谓语...}...+主句{主语+谓语...}......(尽管......,但是......);主句{主语+谓语...}......but+从句{主语+谓语...}............,但是......);Even when+从句{主语+谓语...}......+主句{主语+谓语...}......(即使............);As far as I am concerned+主句{主语+谓语...}......(我认为......);the time when+从句{主语+谓语...}+is preciousso+主语+谓语......(当......时候时间是宝贵的,所以......);what we should do{名词性从句:作主语或宾语}(我们应该所做的事);...doing sth(句子......,做某事。);be to do sth是做某事;the ways of ......的方式)

 

Dear editor

I am writing to tell you that I find that many people are addicted to their smartphones and no one gives others responses at the family feasts or friends parties during the spring festival. 在春节期间的家宴或朋友聚会中,你发现很多人沉迷于手机,不与他人沟通

To be honest(实话说)we held a friend partyhold a party举行聚会) during the last spring festival when(那时) everyone used his own(自己的 smartphone to do anything they neededso I felt the largest distance(感觉拉大距离)though we sat just face to face.你遇到的情况

Smartphones indeed(确实)change the ways of communication(沟通n. and improve(提高v. our efficiency(效率n.but at the same time(同时)they also distance us from othersdistance sb from sb把某人与某人拉开了距离). Even when(即使) we are sitting togethereveryone looks down低头看 and focuses on(专注:on介词不能跟动词要跟动词就用动名词) playing their phonesignoringignore忽视v. others. How embarrassing(多么尴尬呀)!【你的想法

As far as Im concernedthe time when we talk to families and friends is precious(宝贵的、珍贵的adj.so we shouldnt let smartphones control(控制v. our life. What we should do is to put down(放下) the phones and cherish(珍爱、珍惜v. the people around us(我们周边).【你的建议】

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