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Some people point that experiential learning(i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best.

Do you think experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges?

首段：背景+改写题目+引入话题

In recent years，...has been playing a significant role in the modern society where we live. It seems to some people that+从句...，while others believe that+从句...。From my perspective，the most effective methodology may be that+从句....

近年来，在我们现代的社会中，.....一直扮演着重要的角色。一些人认为......，而另一些人认为......。依我之见，最有效的方式是.......

范文：

In recent years，the education has been playing a significant role in the modern society where we live. It seems to some people that experiential learning(i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education，while others believe that a traditional form of teaching is the best. From my perspective，the most effective methodology may be that experiential learning can work well in colleges.

近年来，教育在我们所生活的现代社会中发挥着重要的作用。在一些人看来，体验式学习（即通过学习）在正规教育中很好，而另一些人则认为传统的教学形式是最好的。在我看来，最有效的方法可能是经验式学习在大学里很有效。

第二段：第1观点（你不倾向）

Those people who strongly think that the traditional form of teaching is the best have cogent reasons for it. First and foremost, proponents of traditional teaching methods argue that they provide a structured and systematic approach to learning on the grounds that students acquire a solid foundation of knowledge. Providing that they participate in the traditional teaching methods，students can indeed work well in high schools or colleges. Besides，the engagement and motivation can fostered because they offer numerous benefits that transcend those of the traditional teaching methods. When they meet some problems, it is also easy to solve them.

那些强烈认为传统的教学形式是最好的的人有令人信服的理由。首先，传统教学方法的支持者认为，它们提供了一种结构化和系统的学习方法，因为学生获得了坚实的知识基础。只要他们参与传统的教学方法，学生就可以在高中或大学很好地工作。此外，参与和动机可以促进，因为它们提供了许多超越传统教学方法的好处。当他们遇到一些问题时，也很容易解决。

第三段：第2观点（你倾向的）

However，views on this issue vary from person to person. Some people assert that experiential learning can work well in formal education.To begin with，the experiential learning can develop critical thinking and problem-solving skills in that it motivates students delve deeper into the subjects. It is necessary that the gap between theory and practice should be bridged. Furthermore，experiential learning can promote collaboration and teamwork，for it is essential skills in today’s interconnected world.Therefore，it is the most important to have a experiential learning.

然而，人们对这个问题的看法却因人而异。有些人认为经验学习在正规教育中很有效。首先，经验学习可以发展批判性思维和解决问题的技能，因为它激励学生深入学习科目。理论和实践之间的差距。此外，体验式学习可以促进协作和团队合作，因为它在当今世界是必要的技能，因此，进行体验式学习是最重要的。

结尾段：总结概括

In conclusion，it is obvious that the numerous merits was brought by....，but we cannot ignore ....【总而言之，显而易见的是，......带来许多好处，但是我们不能忽视....】Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.【只要我们以正确的方式去考虑，事情迟早会好转的。】

范文

In conclusion，it is obvious that the numerous merits was brought by the experiential learning，but we cannot ignore the traditional teaching methods.【总而言之，显而易见的是，......带来许多好处，但是我们不能忽视不利之处那就是过度依赖他/他们】Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.【只要我们以正确的方式去考虑，事情迟早会好转的。】

集合

In recent years，the education has been playing a significant role in the modern society where we live. It seems to some people that experiential learning(i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education，while others believe that a traditional form of teaching is the best. From my perspective，the most effective methodology may be that experiential learning can work well in colleges.

Those people who strongly think that the traditional form of teaching is the best have cogent reasons for it. First and foremost, proponents of traditional teaching methods argue that they provide a structured and systematic approach to learning on the grounds that students acquire a solid foundation of knowledge. Providing that they participate in the traditional teaching methods，students can indeed work well in high schools or colleges. Besides，the engagement and motivation can fostered because they offer numerous benefits that transcend those of the traditional teaching methods. When they meet some problems, it is also easy to solve them.

However，views on this issue vary from person to person. Some people assert that experiential learning can work well in formal education.To begin with，the experiential learning can develop critical thinking and problem-solving skills in that it motivates students delve deeper into the subjects. It is necessary that the gap between theory and practice should be bridged. Furthermore，experiential learning can promote collaboration and teamwork，for it is essential skills in today’s interconnected world.Therefore，it is the most important to have a experiential learning.

In conclusion，it is obvious that the numerous merits was brought by the experiential learning，but we cannot ignore the traditional teaching methods.Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.