pte2024.7.27

社会生活the social life

教育the educational systems

交通the transportation systems

经济the development of economy

服务体制the service industries

企业管理the management of the enterprise

制造业the manufacturing industries     

电子产业the electronic industries

自然资源the natural resources

文化产业the cultural industries

媒体产业the media industries

医疗体制the medical systems

科技发展the development of the technology

建筑业the constructing industries

旅游the tourism industries

Some people point that experiential learning(i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best.

Do you think experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges?

首段：背景+改写题目+引入话题

In recent years，...has been playing a significant role in the modern society where we live. It seems to some people that+从句...，while others believe that+从句...。From my perspective，the most effective methodology may be that+从句....

近年来，在我们现代的社会中，.....一直扮演着重要的角色。一些人认为......，而另一些人认为......。依我之见，最有效的方式是.......

第二段：第1观点（你不倾向）

Those people who strongly think that+从句...have cogent reasons for it【强烈赞成......的人有强有力的理由。】. First and foremost, 主句... on the grounds that+从句...【首先，......因为......】. Providing that+从句...，主句...【如果......，........】. Besides，主句...because+从句... 【其次，......因为......】。When 从句..., +主句...【当......时候，......】.

第三段：第2观点（你倾向的）

However，views on this issue vary from person to person. Some people assert that从句...【然而，人们在这个问题上观点不同。他们认为......。】To begin with，主句... in that +从句...【首先，......因为......】. It is necessary that +主语+should do sth.【必要的是，...应该......】 Furthermore，主句...，for+从句...【其次，......，因为......】。Therefore，it is the most important to do sth【因此，做某事是最重要的。】

结尾段：总结概括

In conclusion，it is obvious that the numerous merits was brought by....，but we cannot ignore the drawback that we over rely on it/them.【总而言之，显而易见的是，......带来许多好处，但是我们不能忽视不利之处那就是过度依赖他/他们】Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.【只要我们以正确的方式去考虑，事情迟早会好转的。】