雅思写作2024年7月4日下午6:20

首段：改写

The bar chart displays information about the areas of land damaged by human activities in four major continents of the world.

第二段：总额，平均

The areas of land damaged in Africa and Asia are similar，totaling（总额达到......） approximately 1200 million hectares，while in Australia and Europe the numbers are considerably lower，averaging（平均为......） between 300 and 400 million.

第三段：比较对比

In terms of the causes behind damages，we can see that in Africa，Europe and especially Australia，breading is the leading cause of the land loss，damaging roughly 500,100 and 400 million hectares of land respectively. Next comes tree-cutting which takes away slightly larger areas of land farming in all the three regions.

第四段：比较对比

Asia indicates a slightly different picture，where tree-cutting activities have led to the largest amount of land loss（450 million hectares）. Breading and farming account for the remaining damages（380 and 42 million hectares respectively）.

结尾段：总结概括（最明显最突出的地方）

Overall，breading causes the most pervasive damage to land around the world.

词汇学习：

Continent大陆/陆地n.

Total总数达到v.

Average平均v.

Breeding饲养/教养n.

Pervasive普遍的/广泛的adj.

实用句型

......有......不同的情况...has a...different picture...

在写图表作文地，如果发现后续描写的数据和前项有所不同，可以用上面的句式进行过渡。

“different”之前可以加上”“slightly”、“completely”、“somewhat”等副词强调不同的程度。

例如：

There are more men than women working in the engineering industry. But the nursing sector demonstrate a different picture：women occupy 85% the total nursing workforce.