写一篇深圳旅游

I traveled to Shenzheng with my family on May 10 when we went there by air. 【.....时间+when+从句....】It took us about two hours to get there. 【It takes sb +时间段+to do sth{某人花费多长时间做某事}】It is one of the best cities I visited in China，which made a deep impression on me .【make a deep impression on sb“给某人留下深刻的印象”】I began to like it as soon as I stepped on the earth of this modern city.【主句......as soon as+从句.....“当......的时候，就........”{step on the earth of..“踏上....的土地”}】The increasing number of young people go there to work and live，who can make great contributions to the city of development.【The increasing number of...{越来越多的.......}；主语{人}+谓语+宾语......，who can do sth“........，他们能做某事。”{make great contributions to....“为......做出巨大的贡献” }】

Many scenic spots are in Shenzheng where there is a place is called Chinese Magnificent{绵绣中华}. The place is the largest and richest miniature scenery park（微缩景观公园） in the world，occupying a spacious area（很大的面积）. The park displays nearly 100 China’s most famous culture and natural attractions（自然景点）in the miniature微小的 form arranged according to the geographical location地理位置 as shown on the map.【........in the miniature form arranged according to sth as shown on...“......，以微笑的形式根据某事展示在.....上”】Among them are the Great Wall，the terracotta warriors and horses excavated from the Emperor Qin Shi Huang’s tomb in Xi’an.【介词引导状语+be+主语{倒装句}“中文意思：.......有......”；sth excavated from...“从.....挖掘出某物”】The park is designed and constructed by experts in cultural relics and ancient architecture.

All in all，it is really amazing that you visit this place for one day when it is like finishing your tour around China.【.....for one day when it is like....“......一天就像......”】