雅思写作Writing Task 1【学习范文句式1】

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

题目分析

本题由两幅饼状图组成，分别显示的是澳大利亚普通家庭的能源使用情况以及使用这些能源产生的温室气体排放情况。要求考生读懂两幅图，选取主要信息分别进行描述，并对相关的地方进行比较。描写图片信息时，不仅要比较两图内部信息，还要对两图之间的异同点进行描述。值得注意的是，写作文时不要只是一味罗列异同点，同时还要加入一些细节的扩展。

题目分析

本题由两幅饼状图组成，分别显示的是澳大利亚普通家庭的能源使用情况以及使用这些能源产生的温室气体排放情况。要求考生读懂两幅图，选取主要信息分别进行描述，并对相关的地方进行比较。描写图片信息时，不仅要比较两图内部信息，还要对两图之间的异同点进行描述。值得注意的是，写作文时不要只是一味罗列异同点，同时还要加入一些细节的扩展。

建议布局

参考范文

The two pie charts respectively illustrate statistical information concerning how energy is consumed in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions that result from these energy consumption.

Let us begin with the energy consumption of household facilities in Australia. Obviously,heating consumes the highest proportion of energy, accounting for 42%, followed closely by the data for water heating which also possesses a large percentage-30%.However, the figures for refrigeration, lighting, and cooling are much less significant, 7%,4% and only 2% respectively. Finally, the other 15% of the total energy is consumed by other appliances.

Next comes the situation of greenhouse gas emissions from the usage of those household facilities, which shows apparent differences from the first pie chart. First of all,heating, which consumes the greatest amount of total energy, shows a relatively smaller share in greenhouse gas emission, ranking third of the list with a proportion of 

15%. The biggest share of emissions, however, is from water heating, which accounts for 32%. And proportions of greenhouse gas emissions in refrigeration, lighting and cooling, compared with their figures for energy consumption, are nearly doubled.Greenhouse gas emissions that come from other appliances take up the remaining 28%.

From what has been mentioned above, we can easily come to the conclusion that most of the energy are consumed by heating and water heating in an average Australian household,while the majority of greenhouse gas emissions are caused by water heating and other appliances.

范文翻译

这两个饼状图分别显示了澳大利亚普通家庭能源消耗情况，以及使用这些能源产生的温室气体排放情况的数据信息。

我们先从澳大利亚家用设施的能源使用情况开始讨论。显然暖气设备占据了总体能源消耗的最大比例，42％；紧随其后的是热水设备，它也占据了一个很大的比例，30％。然而，冰箱、照明和制冷设备所占比例就没那么显著了，分别是7％，4％和仅仅2％。最后，剩下15％的能源是其他家电消耗的。

接下来谈谈以上这些家电的温室气体排放情况，与上图存在很明显的不同。首先，耗能最多的暖气设备在温室气体排放方面相对较少，以15％的比重排在第三。然而，最多的温室气体排放来自于热水设备，32％。制冷、照明和冷却设备的温室气体排放量几乎是它们的能源消耗量的两倍。其他家电所产生的温室气体占据了剩下的28％。

根据以上提及的内容，我们可以很轻易地得出这样的结论：在澳大利亚普通家庭，供暖和热水设备消耗了大多数能源，而温室气体则主要是由热水设备和其他家电排放的。

重点词汇

emission

n.排放

proportion

 n.比例

refrigeration

n．制冷

respectively

adv.分别地

majority 

n．多数