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雅思写作之犯罪话题

2020-08-10

Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prisonso as to reduce the crime rate. To what do you agree or disagree

 

首段:背景the criminals that exist+改写 criminals should be given longer terms in prisonso as to reduce the crime rate+引入话题

Recentlyan increasing number of criminals that exist have been concentrated by people. Howeverthere has been much controversy over whether criminals should locked in jails permanently in order to reduce the rate of crime. From my perspectiveI agree the point of views as follows.

 

第二段:将罪犯长期关押在监狱里的好处1

First and foremostit is good that criminals in prison for long time fail to commit crimes continuously. In other wordsmercy to the the criminals may be cruelty to public. Obviouslythievesrobbersrapists or even murderers are released out of jailswhose behaviors can bring a great amount of danger for those law-abiding citizens. Solaw offenders who are punished severely should be given longer terms in prison to diminish the crime rate.

 

第三段:将罪犯长期关押在监狱里的好处2

Besideslonger imprisonment of criminals can deter the potential criminals. This means that would-be criminals must think twice before they commit crimes on the grounds that they are in dead of the severe punishment. Researchers reveal that there is a direct link between the longer imprisonment of criminals and the decline of crime rate. If we were to lenient with criminalsthe world would be in great danger and full of blood and violence.

 

第四段:将罪犯长期关押在监狱里的好处3

Finallythe criminals behaviors are under control when given longer terms in prisonwhich can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to individuals in the modern society. As we all knowthe criminals have to spend more time in prison before they are set freepreventing them from committing crimes again and saving the police much trouble to catch them.

 

结尾段:总结概括(重申中心论点criminals should be given longer terms in prisonso as to reduce the crime rate.

In conclusionI firmly hold to the belief that criminals should be given longer terms in prison and at the same time receive compulsory reclaim.

 

 

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