雅思写作第1课学术小作文图表篇（柱状+表格）
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart and the table show the populations and average ages of people in three countries in1950,2000 and 2050.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart and the table show the populations and average ages of people in three countries in1950,2000 and 2050.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
主题和结构分析
该图表要求描述三个国家（中国、美国和西班牙）在三个年份（注意：其间跨度正好为100年）的人口及其平均年龄。由于其中既有柱状图，也有表格，主体段可以分为两段，分别描写人口和平均年龄。最后一个年份2050的数据是通过预测得出的（foretell），因此我们应该使用将来时态。而三个国家之中，中国的数据比较特殊，可以进行重点描写。
范文
The bar chart shows the population changes in three countries between 1950 and2050 and the table reveals the citizens' average ages during the same period.
Among the three countries, it is obvious that China had the most dramatic increase in population. In 1950, there were only 200 million people in China;however,50 years later, its population rose sharply to 1000 million,five times of the previous level. Moreover, it is projected that the population in China will reach an astonishing 1400 million in 2050. In contrast, population changes in the other two countries are far less drastic, with the United States climbing to almost 700 million in 2050 and Spain growing to 100 million in 2000 and returning to nearly 60 million in 2050, both according to demographic predictions.
In terms of the average ages of people, it is in China again that we witness a substantial growth. In 1950, Chinese people's average age was only 65 years,the lowest among the three countries, while a century later that figure is expected to become the highest - 83 years. In comparison, American citizen's average age shows little variation: it stood at 73 years in 1950, increased to75 years in 2000 and will decrease slightly to 74 years in 2050. Similar to the situation in China, Spanish people's average age grew steadily from 70 to 72years between 1950 and 2000 and is going to reach 77 years in 2050.
In conclusion, the general trend that people's average ages in all three countries,especially China and Spain, are on the rise indicates that there will be an increasingly large proportion of senior citizens and a shrinking number of young people in their societies.
布局清晰 描写具体
Introduction 进行“重述”
柱状图显示了三个国家在1950到2050年间的人口变化，而表格揭示了同期的公民平均年龄的变化。
The bar chart shows the population changes in three countries between 1950and 2050 and the table reveals the citizens' average ages during the same period.
Main Body1对人口变化情况进行“描述一”
在三个国家之中，中国有着最明显的人口增长。
Among the three countries, it is obvious that China had the most dramatic increase in population.
Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述二”
1950年时，中国只有2亿人口，而50年后，中国人口激增到10亿，是过去的五倍。
In 1950, there were only 200 million people in China; however, 50 years later, its population rose sharply to 1000 million, five times of the previous level.
Main Body 1对人口变化情况进行“描述三”
另外，根据预测，在2050年，中国人口将达到令人瞠目结舌的14亿。
Moreover, it is projected that the population in China will reach an astonishing1400 million in 2050.
Main Body1对人口变化情况进行“描述四”
相比之下，其他两个国家的人口变化就远非如此激烈。根据人口学的预测，美国人口在2050年将攀升到7亿，而西班牙人口在2000年增加到1亿，在2050年将回落到大约6千万。
In contrast, population changes in the other two countries are far less drastic,with the United States climbing to almost 700 million in 2050 and Spain growing to 100 million in 2000 and returning to nearly 60 million in 2050, both according to demographic predictions.
Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述一”
在人们的平均年龄方面，我们再次见证了中国的巨大增长。
In terms of the average ages of people, it is in China again that we witness a substantial growth.
Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述二”
1950年时的中国人平均年龄仅仅为65岁，是当时三个国家之中最低的。而一个世纪以后，该数字将跃居榜首，达到83岁。
In 1950, Chinese people's average age was only 65 years, the lowest among the three countries, while a century later that figure is expected to become the highest—83 years.
Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述三”
相比之下，美国公民的平均年龄并没有多少变化：1950年时是73岁，2000年时增加到75岁，而到了2050年将略微下降到74岁。
In comparison, American citizen's average age shows little variation:it stood at 73 years in 1950, increased to 75 years in 2000 and will decrease slightly to74 years in 2050.
Main Body 2对人口的平均年龄进行“描述四”
与中国的情况相似，西班牙人口的平均年龄从1950年的70岁稳步增长到2000年的72岁，并将在2050年达到77岁。
Similar to the situation in China, Spanish people's average age grew steadily from 70 to 72 years between 1950 and 2000 and is going to reach 77 years in2050.
Conclusion 揭示出“总体规律”及其意义
三个国家（特别是中国和西班牙）人口平均年龄呈现出上升趋势的总体规律表明了在它们的社会中将出现越来越高比例的老年人，以及年轻人数量将萎缩。
In conclusion, the general trend that people's average ages in all three countries, especially China and Spain, are on the rise indicates that there will be an increasingly large proportion of senior citizens and a shrinking number of young people in their societies.
