英语专业八级专项培训教材第1册写作题讲解TEST 4

审题

本题讨论的话题是风靡国内外的共享单车。共享单车在方便人们出行的同时，一些问题也随之出现。本题要求首先概述共享单车的优缺点，然后发表自己的观点。在具体行文方面，考生可以在简要概括材料后提出自己的观点；然后阐述原因，支持个人论点；最后总结全文，重申论点。

范文

Can Bike-sharing Promote Green Transportation?

Nowadays,shared bikes as a means of transportation are becoming a new trend. They offer urban residents a new option for short journeys in cities.On the one hand,bike-sharing brings convenience for people's travelling and does good to the environment as well.On the other hand,along with its rapid development, some problems like random parking,vandalism and personal occupation of shared bikes are exposed, posing a significant challenge to urban management.So some people put forward the question:Can bikesharing service promote green transportation in a real sense?

In my view,bike-sharing service should be welcomed by cities aspiring to advocate green travel and reduce vehicle emissions and traffic congestion. However,if those exposed problems are not taken seriously,they will hinder the urban development,let alone promote green transportation.

To begin with,bike-sharing platforms need to constantly perfect their management and maintenance services to regulate users' behavior. Still,we cannot ignore the fact that in many cases dishonest users cannot be restrained by technical means alone.Instead,they are likely to abide by the rules when administrative intervention is in place.So,considering the urban infrastructure construction,what the government should do is to formulate policies and standards and seal breaches to further monitor users' behavior, The unruly users who are traced by the GPS system installed on the bikes are less likely to repeat their mistakes when an official warning is given by the urban management authorities.Besides,it is essential for each of us to enhance our personal quality and raise the awareness of green transportation,so as to co-create a sharing atmosphere.

To conclude,as an innovation of non-motorized means of transportation,bike-sharing not only has a great impact on the traditional ways of public travelling,but also tests the morality of the public.Therefore,whether or not shared bikes can promote green transportation depends on the joint efforts of all of us.

闪光词句

● On the one hand, bike-sharing brings convenience for people's travelling and does good to the environment as well.一方面，共享单车在给人们的出行带来方便的同时对环境也非常有益。

● On the other hand, along with its rapid development, some problems like random parking, vandalism and personal occupation of shared bikes are exposed, posing a significant challenge to urban management.另一方面，随着它的快速发展，随意停放、任意破坏、私自占有共享单车等问题暴露出来，这给城市管理带来巨大挑战。

● traffic congestion 交通拥堵

● let alone 更不必说

● administrative intervention 行政干预. infrastructure construction 基础设施建设. breach 缺口，漏洞