2022年考研英语（二）写作Part 2讲解

Part B 我国快递业务量变动情况

 

一、审题谋篇

 

1.分析图表数据，解读背后现象

 

图表信息：图表下方标题为“2018〜2020年我国快递业务量变动情况（单位:十亿件）”。图表中显示的变化：过去三年间，全国总体的快递业务量510亿件— 640亿件~830亿件，农村的快递业务量120亿件—150亿件—300亿件。

 

信息解析：①数据显示2018至2020年间，我国快递业务总量连续三年明显上升，特别是19至20年涨幅明显。 ②农村地区增长量更为迅猛，尤其是19至20年直接翻倍。

 

推导寓意：①随着电子商务的蓬勃发展，网购成为人们的购物首选，收发快递更是家常便饭。②疫情期间，宅经济兴起、直播带货火爆，刺激了快递业务的发展。③国家致力于完善农村基础设施，增加农村网点覆盖率，推广智慧物流，不断释放农村快递业务的潜力，以发展农村经济、推动乡村振兴。

 

2. 罗列关键词

 

描写关键词 :bar chart/graph 柱 状图；increase significantly/considerably/substantially 大幅度上涨；

jump/shoot up/surge/soar/rocket/skyrocket 猛增；double/be twice 翻番；billion 十亿

 

话题关键词 :fast mail/express delivery/courier (service)快递；parcel/package 包裹；business volume

业务量；logistics 物流；postal service 邮政服务; expressman/deliveryman/courier，快递员；e—commerce/e-business/online business 电商

 

3. 行文思路

 

第一段：描述图表；

第二段：明确图表反映的现象，分析原因；

第三段：阐述现象带来的积极影响。

 

二、优秀范文赏析

 

优秀范文

 

①According to the bar chart, the volume of express parcels across China surged from 51 billion pieces in 2018 to 83 billion pieces in 2020. ②When it comes to the rural areas, the trend is particularly striking9 which doubled to 30 billion pieces in the last one year alone.

①This chart reveals the robust growth of China's express delivery sector. ② It is closely tied to the e-commerce boom. ③To be specific, as livestreaming e-commerce takes off amid the pandemic, people sheltered at home are more inclined to purchase online, thereby giving impetus to the delivery business. ④ Moreover, the government has made sustained efforts to improve infrastructure in the countryside, which paves the way for the extension of courier services to the vast rural markets. ⑤ Add to this the increased efficiency of logistics, and it is hardly surprising that the volume of express delivery should continue to soar in recent years.

① The burgeoning courier sector not only facilitates people's lives, but also provides a massive boost to the country's economy.②More significantly, by opening up new employment opportunities for rural residents and promoting sales of agricultural produce, it makes a huge contribution to rural revitalization.

 

参考译文

 

①由柱状图可知，中国的快递包裹总量从2018年的510亿件激增至2020年的830亿件。②具体到农村地区，这一趋势尤其惊人，仅在过去—年就翻了一番，达到300亿件。

①该图展现了我国快递行业的强劲发展。②这与电商的繁荣密切相关。③具体而言，疫情期间随着电商直播迅速走红，宅在家里的人们更加倾向于网购，从而推动了快递业务的增长。④此外，政府一直在不断努力完善农村的基础设施， 这为快递服务向广阔的农村市场延伸铺平了道路。⑤再加上物流效率的提升，快递业务量近年来持续猛增，并不令人感到意外。

①蓬勃发展的快递业不仅便利

了人们的生活，还为国家经济提供了强大动力。②更重要的是，它为农村居民带来了新的就业机会、促进了农产品的销售，进而为乡村振兴做出了巨大贡献。

 

必备表达

 

1. striking  引人注目的；显著的

2. robust growth 强劲发展

3. be closely tied to...与... 密切相关

4. livestreaming e-commerce 电商直播

5. pandemic  全国或全球性）流行病

6. shelter  躲避（风雨或危险）

7. be inclined to do sth 倾向于做某事

8. give impetus to...给... 带来推动力

9. infrastructure  基础设施

10. burgeoning  迅速发展的

11. facilitate  促进；使便利

12. provide a massive boost to...   为……提供强大动力

13. open up （使某事物）成为可能

14. rural revitalization 乡村振兴

 

活用外刊

 

1. Dispo, a new photo-sharing app that mimics the experience of using a disposable camera, is taking off. People are clamoring for invites to test the beta version. And investors are betting big on its future

------ The New York Times

 

译文：一款类似于使用一次性相机的新型照片共享应用程序Disp。正大受欢迎。人们争相抢着受邀体验其测试版本。投资者对其未来押下重注。 点拨：短语take off基础义为“（飞机）起飞”，可引申表示“（观念、产品、行业等）突然大受欢迎，迅速流行”，可用于替换普通表达become popular very quickly

 

2. Combining external memory and deep learning, DeepMind's program learns how to do tasks independently, and could pave the way for sophisticated Al assistants.

 ------ The Guardian

 

译文：DeepMind的程序既拥有外部记忆，又能够深度学习，可以学会如何独立完成任务，从而为高

级人工智能助手的出现铺平道路。 点拨：短语pave the way for...表示“为....铺平道路；创造条件”，用来形象地说明某事物的积极影响，可替换普通表达make. . . possible

 

精彩句式

句子成形步骤：

 

① 写出简单句

Livestreaming e-commerce becomes popular during the pandemic.

People tend to stay at home and purchase online.

This promotes the development of the delivery business

 

② 利用连词、分词结构将简单句整合

As livestreaming e-commerce becomes popular during the pandemic, people tend to stay at home and

purchase online, thereby/thus promoting the development of the delivery business.

 

③ 在句首添加衔接短语以增加句间的连贯性，在句中替换词汇表述以增加表达的精准性及高级感

To be specific, as livestreaming e-commerce takes off amid the pandemic, people sheltered at home

are more inclined to purchase online, thereby giving impetus to the delivery business.

句子成形步骤： 

 

① 写出简单句

Another factor is the increased efficiency of logistics.

For this reason 9 the volume of express delivery continues to increase in recent years.

It is not surprising.

 

② 利用连词将简单句整合

Another factor is the increased efficiency of logistics, and for this reason it is not surprising that the

volume of express delivery should continue to increase in recent years.

 

③使用固定句式 、替换个别词汇以精简表述，同时提升表达的准确性

Add to this the increased efficiency of logistics, and it is hardly surprising that the volume of express delivery should continue to soar in recent years. 注：add to this/that...意为“此外；再加上”，用以承上补

充另一因素（this和that均概指上文提及的内容），其后可接“名词（短语）”或“the fact that+同位语从句”，常与and连接的另一分句连用，引出所有因素带来的结果。

 

篇章衔接

 

第一段（2句）：描述图表。①句关注全国快递业务量的增长情况。②句聚焦农村快递业务量的涨

幅变化（选择描述19至20年的数据，原因在于其更能凸显农村地区增长量的迅猛）。

 

第二段（5句）：概述图表所反映的现象，分析现象产生的原因。①句总结图表反映的现象“我国快

递业蓬勃发展”。②③句从宏观环境的角度分析原因：疫情期间电商直播迅速走红，带动了快递业的发展。④句从政府政策的角度分析原因：政府努力完善农村基础设施，为快递业的扩展开辟空间。⑤句从行业自身的角度分析原因：物流效率不断提高，助力快递业务迅速增长。

 

第三段（2句）：阐述图表所述现象带来的影响。①句介绍对整个国家的积极影响“便利生活，提振

经济”。②句进一步强调对农村的重要意义“带动就业与产业，促进乡村振兴”。

 

应用模板

 

本模板适用于“双因素历时同向持续增长”的柱状图，主题多反映某市场/行业的积极发展态势。

 

I①As is demonstrated in the bar chart, the market for ________ is generally entering a phase of dramatic/substantial/steady growth. ② Specifically， 类别1  surpassed/exceeded最高值 in 年份,about 涨幅 more than________ year(s) ago.③It is worth noting that a considerable rise in 类别2 occurred from 年份，and since then this emerging/burgeoning industry gained/gathered momentum.

II ①Several factors have contributed to this sharp increase ②For one thing, the rapid economic growth brings about higher disposable income, allowing people to ________ ③ For another, the government has released a series of preferential policies to promote ________ ，which will undoubtedly stimulate _________ ④In addition, ________ has/have pushed some consumers to focus their attention on________ .

III①Admittedly，this business still has a long way to go, as ________ is/ are yet to be improved/ perfected. ② But its popularization will certainly be as irresistible as shown in the chart.

 

①如图所示，（主题词）市场总体上正进入急剧/平稳增长期。②具体来看,______ 年，（类别1）突破（最高值）大关，比______ 年前增加约（涨幅）。③值得注意的是，（类别2）从年      开始大幅上升，自此之后这一新兴/蓬勃的产业开始发展壮大。

 ①有几个因素促成了该激增态势。 ② 一方面，经济的快速增长带来了更高的可支配收入，使得人们能够______ 。 ③ 另一方面，政府制定了 一系列优惠政策来促进______ ，这无疑会刺激________ 。④此外，______也促使一部分消费者将目光投向______ 。

①诚然，由于______ 有待完善，该产业仍有很长的路要走。②但其推广普及的趋势必然如图所示那般不可阻挡。

 

模板注释：该模板第一段①句概括图表的总体趋势，②③句列举具体/显著的数据。第二段①句承

上启下引出原因分析，②③④句分别从宏观经济、政府政策、现实情形三方面阐述趋势背后的原因。第三段欲扬先抑，①句先承认当前的局限性，②句再积极预测未来的发展。

 

三、写作储备

 

话题表述补充

 

upgrade transportation facilities and sorting equipment 升级运输设施和分拣设备

smart logistics and supply chain 智慧物流和供应链

track the whereabouts of their packages in real-time 实时跟踪包裹的位置

same-day/next-day delivery 当日 /次日送达；door-to-door delivery 送货上门

drone delivery 无人机送货；pickup points/package collection points 取件点

 

写作素材积累

 

In cities like Beijing and Shanghai, online shopping is already a major part of daily life, leaving limited room for growth. As a result, e-commerce companies are increasingly turning to smaller cities and rural areas, where disposable income remains relatively high, in part due to lower living costs.

 

在北京和上海等城市，网购已经成为日常生活的重要组成部分，业务增长空间有限。因此，电商公

司正日益转向小城市和农村，这些地区的可支配收入仍相对较高，部分原因是生活成本较低。

 

Rural delivery services have become a new growth point for the sector. The business volume of rural delivery services is seven percentage points higher than in urban areas.For villagers the rural e-commerce business has also become a popular way of increasing their incomes.

 

农村快递服务已成为该行业新的增长点。农村的快递业务量比城市高出七个百分点。对于村民

来说，农村电商业务也成为了一种增加收入的普遍方式。

 

The e-commerce giant JD. com has been using artificial intelligence, big data and warehouse robotics to increase logistics efficiency. The company claims its logistics network already covers 99 % of the population of China, and at least 90% of orders can be delivered within 24 hours In more remote areas, the company has collaborated with local stores to serve as mini-warehouses.

 

电商巨头京东一直在利用人工智能、大数据和仓库机器人来提高物流效率。该公司称其物流网络

已经覆盖了中国99%的人口，至少90%的订单可以在24小时内送达。在更偏远的地区，该公司与当地商店合作,将其当作小型仓库。

 

四、写作练习

 

请参考模板和话题词汇，按照下列要求进行写作。

 

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET・(15 points)

话题词汇

 

new energy vehicle 新能源汽车

gasoline/diesel vehicle 汽油/柴油车

production and sales 产销量

exhaust gas 尾气

clean energy 清洁能源

the greenhouse effect 温室效应