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2022年考研英语(二)Part A写作讲解

2023-01-02

Section IV Writing

 

Part A

 

47. Directions:

 

Suppose you are planning a campus food festival, write an email to international students in

your university to

 

1) introduce the food festival

2) invite them to participate

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET. (10 points)

Do not use your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead

 

Section IV Writing

 

Part A 邀请留学生参加校园美食节

 

审题谋篇

 

一、解析题目指令,确定行文要点抓取指令关键词

 

1.抓取指令关键词

 

Suppose you are planning a campus food festival 2. Write an e-mail 3 to the international students in your university to

1) introduce the food festival, and

2) invite them to participate 5.

 

2.梳理信息

 

1)写作人身份:“你”/大学生,也即活动策划者

2)写作话题:校园美食节

3)写作类型:电子邮件

4)写作对象:留学生

5)交际目的:介绍美食节并邀请留学生参加

 

二、罗列关键词

 

delicious/tasty/gourmet food/dish/cuisinedelicacy/culinary delight美味佳肴;speciality特色菜;taste/sample/savour 品尝;feast on sth enjoy sth to one's heart's content 尽情享用

 

三、行文思路

 

第一段:说明活动的地点和时间,发出活动邀请;

第二段:介绍活动的具体内容/安排;

第三段:提及活动的意义,期待对方参与。

 

四、优秀范文

 

Dear international students,

There will be a multicultural food festival at the Main Dining Hall from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. on May 27th.You are cordially invited to this occasion.

The event features a variety of local specialties,ranging from traditional homely delicacies to popular street snacks, all elaborately prepared by our catering staff.If interested, you are also encouraged to cook your hometown dishes in groups with the ingredients provided on site.This will definitely be a highlight of the event.After preparation, all participants can move along the booths,sampling these delicious foods with cheerful music.

Don't miss this golden opportunity to get a taste of different cultures and experience more joy in life! We keenly look forward to your participation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

五、参考译文

 

亲爱的留学生们:

527日上午10点至下午3点在主食堂将会举办一场多元文化美食节。②诚邀你们一起参加。

①本次活动主打各种地方特色美食,有传统家常菜肴,也有人气街头小吃,均由食堂餐饮人员精心准备。②此外,如果感兴趣的话,也鼓励你们利用现场提供的食材烹饪自己的家乡菜。③这绝对会成为活动的一大壳点。④制作完成后,所有参与者可以伴着欢快的音乐, 挨个摊位品尝美食。

①不要错过这次尝试各种不同文化、体验更多生活乐趣的绝佳机会!②我们热切期盼你们的到来。 诚挚的,

李明

 

六、必备表达

 

1. cordially  热情友好地

2. feature  ... 为特色

3. elaborately   精心地

4. ingredient  成分;(尤指烹饪)材料

5. on site现场地

6. highlight  最好(或最精彩)的部分

7. booth  货摊;摊位

8. sample  品尝

9. get a taste of...   体验/尝试...

10. keenly  热切地;强烈地

 

七、活用外刊

 

Last week thousands of Boston parents signed their children up for a variety of innovative courses,ranging from aviation technology to bilingual studies, in 22 magnet schools due to open in September.Time

 

译文:上周,数千名波士顿家长为孩子报名参加了从航空技术到双语学习等各种创新课程,这些课程由22所磁力学校提供,将于9月份开课。注:magnet school指大城市中提供额外课程以招收其他地区学生的有吸引力的学校,称作“磁力学校”或“特色学校”。

 

点拨:a variety of sth,ranging from...to...意为“从……到……之间的各种事物”,用于对重点阐述的内容进行举例说明,可替换常用表达 many things including/such as...and......

 

八、精彩句式

句子成形步骤:

 

① 写出简单句

The event provides a lot of local foods.

These foods include home cooking and street snacks.

All of these foods are prepared by our catering staff.

 

② 利用介词、关系代词将简单句整合

The event provides a lot of local foods9 including home cooking and street snacks, allof which areprepared by our catering staff.

 

③ 通过替换词语,添加修饰词来增加表达的准确性及内容的饱满度

The event features a variety of local specialties, ranging from traditional homely delicacies to popular

street snacks > all elaborately prepared by our catering staff.

 

九、篇章衔接

 

第一段(2句):①句引岀活动,并说明活动的地点和时间;②句发出活动邀请。

第二段(4句):①句介绍活动的主打内容;②③句介绍活动的实践环节,鼓励被邀请人积极参与,并说明其参与对于活动的重要性,使邀请理由更充分;④句介绍活动的品尝环节。

第三段(2句):①句指出活动的积极意义,吸引对方前来参与;②句期待被邀请人出席。

 

十、模板提炼

 

本模板由【优秀范文】提炼、改编而来,适用于典礼、宴会、派对等活动的邀请信。

Dear international students

There will be a/an 活动名称 at 活动地点 on 活动时间 . You are cordially invited to this occasion.

The event features a variety of 主打内容 ranging from 举例说明 to 举例说明 . If interested, you

are also encouraged to 期待对方做的事 . This will definitely be a highlight of the event.  Afterwards, all

participants can按时间顺序进行的下一步内容.

Don't miss this golden opportunity to enjoy a fun-filled day and create memorable moments together!

We keenly look forward to your participation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

十一、写作储备

 

1.邀请信常用表达

 

(1) 开篇段:说明写作目的

   We sincerely/cordially invite you to attend. . . which is scheduled for (date) in (place)

我们诚挚地邀请您参加……(时间和地点)计划举办的……

   On behalf of.・・ I would like to invite you to take part in/participate in/attend. .

我谨代表... 邀请您参加....

   ・・・ will be held at (place) on (date) We will be delighted if you could join us.

……将于(时间和地点)举办。您若能加入,我们会非常高兴。

 

(2) 中间段:说明活动内容或邀请理由

The event is aimed at/designed to/prepared in the intention to 此次活动旨在...

With the theme of.・・,this event will focus on...此次活动主题为... ,主要聚焦于....

We would very much like you to participate in this ceremony/party and share your. .我们非常希望您能参与这次的典礼/派对,并分享您的……

You will have a happy time/memorable experience in...

……中,您将度过快乐的时光/收获难忘的经历。

 

(3) 结尾段:表达期待

We look forward to seeing you/your presence at the event 我们期待在活动现场见到您。

Your attendance and participation will be greatly appreciated.我们将非常感谢您的出席和参与。

I can hardly wait to see you at the event.我迫不及待地想要在现场见到你。

 

十二、写作练习

 

请按照下列要求进行写作。

 

Directions:

Suppose you are planning an intangible cultural heritage workshop Write an e-mail to the international

students in your university to

1) briefly introduce the workshop activities, and

2) invite them to attend

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not use your own name Use "Li Minginstead (10 points)

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