大学英语四级写作指导1
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the challenges of studying abroad. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
The Challenges of Study Abroad
首段,看门见山,引出话题:出国留学绝不轻松,因为你会遇到许许多多意想不到的困难和挫折
As is universally acknowledged【总所周知,......】,it is by no means easy to...【......绝不轻松。】since+从句...【因为......】
中间段,详细展开,具体阐述出国留学可能遇到的挑战:
第一,文化冲击是最大的挑战
First and foremost,...,which means that+从句...【首先,......,这意味着......】
第二,语言障碍可能是许多留学生的噩梦
Besides,...【其次,......】
第三,学业要求可能会压垮你
Last but not least,...if...【最后,如果......,......】。......
结尾段,提出建议和展望:尽管挑战重重,但只要你努力学习,持之以恒,终将熬过“黑暗岁月”,迎接光明的未来。
Despite+名词...,...【尽管......,但是......】。And then+句子...
写作句式:引入话题
Recently,more and more students...for the sake of better career future.【最近,越来越多的学生......,他们是为了更好的事业前景。】
As is universally acknowledged,it is by no means easy to...since you could come across a list of unexpected difficulties and setbacks which you cannot imagine before...【总所周知,......绝不轻松,因为你会遇到许许多多意想不到的困难和挫折,这是你在.....之前无法想象的。】
写作句式:表达观点
Students studying abroad have to face...and adapt to the new living environment. If students don’t...,they may...【留学生必须面对......(问题),并适应新的生活环境。如果他们不能......,他们可能......。】
Many students are too ...to...,thus it is rather difficult for them to ...without any living experience.【许多学生太......而不能......,因此对他们而言,没有任何生活经验去......是很困难的。】
写作思路
首段:
As is universally acknowledged,it is by no means easy to(主题)since you could come across a list of unexpected difficulties and setbacks.【总所周知,......绝不轻松,因为你会遇到许许多多意想不到的困难和挫折。】
中间段:
First and foremost,the top challenge is (挑战1),which you menas you may not (具体阐述挑战1)Besides,(挑战2)could be a nightmare for people who(具体阐述挑战2) Last but not least,you could be overwhelmed by(挑战3). (具体阐述挑战3)
【首先,最大的挑战是......,这意味着你可能无法......。其次,......可能是人们的噩梦,因为他们......。最后但同样重要的一点是,......可能会压垮你。......。】
结尾段:
Despite all these terrifying challenges,you will finally manage to come through this“dark age”with your hard work,persistence and endurance.【尽管存在以上种种可怕的挑战,但通过努力学习,持之以恒,你终将熬过这段“黑暗岁月”。】