英语专业四级写作题目与范文Lesson 3
题目：
Nowadays many kids are overprotected by their parents. But is it necessary to do that? Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture and give your view on the issue.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
首段描绘图片，指出父母的过度保护孩子带来危害。
In the picture，.....
This picture draws readers’ attention to ...and the harm it may cause.
中间段提出个人看法：父母应该培养孩子的独立性。通过比喻花朵要经历风雨，强调孩子需要磨练。如果父母事事代办，孩子只会生活在虚幻中，长大后难以应对现实世界的各种考验。
In my opinion，...
结尾段总结全文：父母应该懂得放手，应道孩子踏上独立自主的道路。
In short，...【简而言之，......】
范文：
Don't Overprotect Kids
In the picture, a little boy is walking pompously in the rain. His mother is holding an umbrella for him. Likewise,his father is holding an umbrella for his mother and his grandmother for his father. Not far away, his grandfather,with an umbrella in hand, is rushing to catch up with his grandmother. Under the picture, the caption reads: "Many protective umbrellas for a kid". This picture draws readers' attention to parents' and grandparents' overprotection towards their kids and the harm it may cause.
In my opinion, parents should leave some room for their kids to take care of themselves. Although it is quite understandable that parents want their kids to be safe and sound, overprotection is not beneficial to the growth and development of their kids. Kids are like flowers that need to experience the wind and rain to get stronger and survive subsequent storms. If parents build a carefree and trouble-free fantasy world for their children, these children will not grow into independent individuals who are capable of handling various difficulties in life.
In short, it is advisable that parents know the importance of letting go and launching their kids on the journey to independence. Anyway, the outside world is the destination for kids when they grow up.
不要过度保护孩子
图中,一个小男孩大模大样地在雨中走着,其母亲为他打着雨伞。同样地,他的父亲也为孩子的母亲打着个,而男孩的祖母则为他的父亲打伞。不远处,男孩的祖父手里拿着一把伞,正急着去追赶他的祖母。在图下方,有一行字:“一个孩子的多把保护伞”。这幅图让读者注意到父母和祖父母对孩子的过度保护以及由此可能造成的危害。
在我看来,父母应该留一些空间,让孩子自己照顾自己。虽然父母希望自己孩子平平安安是可以理解的,但过度保护不利于孩子的成长和发展。孩子就像花柔,需要经历风雨才能变得更强,从而才能在以后的暴风雨中生存下去。如果父母为孩子筑起一个无忧无虑的虚幻世界,那这些孩子就不会成长为有能力应付生活中各种困难的独立个体。
简而言之,父母应当知道放手并让孩子踏上迈向独立自主的旅程的重要性。无论如何,在孩子长大之后,外面的世界就是他们的目的地。
亮点词汇
pompously ad. 大模大样地
rush to 急奔
understandable a.可理解的
survive vt. 从困境中挺过来
carefree a. 无忧无虑的
individual n.个人
handle vt. 处理
let go 放手
likewise ad.同样地
overprotection n.过分保护
safe and sound 平安无事
subsequent a.后来的
trouble-free a.无故障的
be capable of 能够
various a. 不同的
launch on 把······引向
