湛江雅托英语培训中心雅思8写作Test 2 WRITIN GTASK 1
湛江雅托英语培训中心雅思8写作Test 2 WRITIN GTASK 1
首段:
The three pie charts indicate statistical data concerning about the changes of annual expenditure in a particular school in the UK in the years of 1981,1991 and 2001.【分词作后置定语的简单句】
第二段:动态变化
When it came to the teaches’ salary,the percentage in 1981 when it was 40% had an abrupt increase with 50% in 1991,while a significant decline with 45% in 2001.【when引导定语从句和while引导状语】Besides,other workers’ salary emerged,which collapsed rapidly from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001.【which引导非限定性定语从句】Furthermore,the cost of resources e.g.books occupying 15% soared dramatically by 5% in 1991 but diminished to 9% in 2001.【分词作后置定语和but转折并列结构 】Moreover,the furniture and equipment whose percentage was 15% in 1981 suffered from a downward trend with 5% in 1991,ascending suddenly to 23% in 2001.【whose引导定从句和分词作状语】Also,the insurance only leading 2% in 1981 increase gradually to 8% in 2001.【简单句和分词作后置定语】
第三段:静态比较
To sum up,the teachers’ salary in total school spending ranked the first place,whereas the insurance dominated the smallest percentage in UK in 1981,1991 and 2001.【由whereas引导转折状语从句】Although they displayed the second position in 1981 and 1991,the other workers’ salaries had dropped to the third place by 2001.【让步状语从句】 As for the furniture and equipment,the percentage of 1981 was threefold more than that of 1991,as well as that of 2001 was nearly five times as much as that of 1991.【比较状语】
结尾段:总结概括
To sum up,there was a great change and big difference in total school spending in UK over a span of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.【there be机构句型】