雅思句子学习1

The line graph below shows the amount of the sales in the wood and jewelry in Japan between 1995 and 2010.

 

首段：

The line graph indicates statistical data concerning about...【曲线图描述了关于......的数据。】

The line graph indicates statistical data concerning about the sales of wood and jewelry in Japan over a span of 15 years from 1995 to 2010.

 

第二段：

Although+从句主语+分词作状语修饰主语+从句谓语...，主句主语+主句谓语...，分词作状语解释下一步。【尽管......，但是......】--前半句与后半句相反

Although the amount of the sales in the jewelries plummeting from approximately 40% in 1995 to 25% in 1997 soared significantly to 40% in 2002 when it was the same as that in 1995，the sales collapsed to 20% in 2004，rocking to more than 40% in 2010.

 

第三段：

主句主语+that+从句谓语...+主句谓语...，while+主语+谓语. After that，主语+谓语...，the percentage/proportion/number/amount/figure/rate of which+从句谓语...。【......，然而，......。之后，......，它们的......。】

Moreover，the woods that displayed 10% of sales ascended considerably to 30% in 2002，while the proportion declined dramatically about 15% in 2004. After that，the amount of the sales in woods rose sharply to 40% in 2005 and then had a stable level at 40% for 4 years from 2005 to 2009，the percentage of which dropped rapidly to the bottom at 15% in 2010.

 

结尾段：

To sum up，there was a great change in the field of...where+从句主语+从句谓语...。On the contrary，主句主语whose+名词（作从句主语）+从句谓语...+主句谓语...。【总而言之，在......方面变化极大，其中......。相比之下，......他的......】

To sum up，there was a great change in the field of the sales of jewelries and woods where the amount of jewelries was much more than woods during the period of 15 years between 1995 and 2010.

 

提醒：

On the contrary，the jewelries whose sales was fluctuated was much more than woods that waved.