专插本英语写作范文分析

Title: Online Shopping

 

Outline:

 

(1)网上购物成为购物的一种新方式,它给人们带来了很多方便,同时也暴露出很多弊端;

 

(2)我们应该如何把握这一新兴的购物方式;

 

(3)“我”的看法。

 

【写作思路】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点要求描述网上购物的流行与弊端,第二点要求提出解决办法,以便更好地运用这一购物方式,第三点要求闻述“我”的看法。由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

 

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述网上购物成为购物的一种新方式,这种方式存在着种种神端;对如何把握这一新的购物方式给出建议;表明自己的看法。

 

此外,此题提纲略作变化,例如,第二部分如果要求分析此现象出现的原因或影响就可变成现象阐释型作文。

范文

 

Online Shopping

 

In recent years, more and more people are shopping online because for them, online shopping is not only fashionable, but also helps to save time, money and labor. However, this new mode of shopping is bringing ab many new problems, too. For example, the goods bought online may not be of good quality. Besides, it is not v safe to pay by credit card online. Therefore, it is high time that we found ways to make good use of online shopping.

 

 First of all, you should choose reliable online shops so that you can buy reliable products. Secondly, you m be careful when paying by credit card. Thirdly, you had better not buy very high-priced goods online.

 

In sum, we should be more careful when shopping on line and it is necessary that we take some measures to avoid the problems brought by shopping on line.