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大学英语四级写作范文分析

2021-10-14

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

 

审题思路

 

此次话题师生关系贴近学生生活,因此写起来并不难。简单开篇之后,考生应该将重点放在第二段,给出处理好师生关系的一些建议。当然,这个话题还可以从不同的角度入手,比如老师应如何做,或者师生共同努力,等等。考生应结合自己的实际情况,从自己最擅长的角度写,这样容易做到言之有物。本文仅从学生角度给出了三条处理好师生关系的建议。

 

写作提纲

 

一、引出话题:从学生角度分享几条建立良好师生关系的建议(share some tips,from students' perspective)

 

二、具体建议

1.留下良好的第一印象(leave a good first impression)

2.努力学习,课上积极表现(study hard and be active in class)

3.课下经常与老师交流(keep contact with your teacher after class)

 

三、得出结论:做到学业成绩良好、课上与老师配合或者与老师成为朋友,师生关系就不会复杂(never complex)

 

范文点评

 

Teacher-student Relationship Is Never Complex

 

The relationship between teachers and students has been hotly discussed in recent years in China for more and more attention has been paid to education. Today I would like to share some tips on how to get along well with teachers from students' perspective.

 

First and foremost, leave a good first impression on your teacher. As the saying goes, well begun is half done. A good first impression is important for teachers to remember your name among your fellow students. ⑤Secondly, study hard and be active in class. A student who loves study can definitely impress teachers deeply. ⑥Finally, keep contact with your teacher after class so that you could make friends with each other.

 

To conclude, teacher-student relationship is never complex if you could have an excellent academic performance, be cooperative in class or make friends with your teacher.

精彩点评

 

开门见山,描述现象:师生关系成为近几年热门话题。

切入主题:从学生角度给出自己的建议。

③⑤⑥ First and foremostSecondly Finally 具体列举建立良好师生关系的建议,层次分明。

引用谚语,给文章增加文采。

总结全文,给出结论:师生关系并不复杂。

 

加分亮点

 

attention...paid to sth.注意……(被动用法)

Well begun is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。

impress 使······印象深刻

academic performance 学业表现

 

全文翻译

 

师生关系并不复杂

 

由于人们对教育越来越关注,师生关系近几年在中国引起热议。今天,我想从学生角度分享几条关于如何与老师和睦相处的建议。

 

首先,给老师留下良好的第一印象。常言道:良好的开端是成功的一半。良好的第一印象对于让老师从你的众多同学中记住你非常重要。第二,努力学习,在课堂上积极表现。一个热爱学习的学生一定会让老师印象深刻。最后,课下经常与老师沟通,这样你们就会成为朋友。

 

总结而言,如果你学业表现良好、课上积极配合或与老师成为朋友,那么师生关系就绝对不会复杂。

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