医护英语第二篇写作思路1

Do advantages outweigh disadvantages？

首段：

Recently，...（主题：主语）has been playing a significant role in the modern society. However，...（改写：主语）has sparked a wide range of intense controversies over whether the advantages outweigh disadvantages. Therefore，this is my perspective as follows.

近年来，......一直扮演现代社会的重要角色。然而，关于优点是否胜于缺点，......引发了一连串激烈的争论。因此，我讨论的观点如下。

第二段：优点

Obviously， there are numerous advantages that are taken into consideration. First and foremost，...because+从句...。For example，...as+从句...。Secondly，...，which can...。For instance，...since+从句...。Ultimately，...。This means that+从句...。

明显的是，有很多优点。首先，......因为......。例如，......因为......。其次，......，这能够......。。例如，......因为......。最后，......。这意味着......

第三段：缺点

Although these benefit a lot，we cannot overlook the drawbacks that+从句...。The main reason is that+从句...。Given that+从句...，and given that+从句...，+主句...。In the second place，...because of+名词...。In other words，...such as+名词...。Lastly，...。This cannot ignore the purpose whose reason is ...。

尽管这些有很多好处，但是我们也不能忽视的缺点是......。首先，......因为......。例如，......因为......。其次，......，这能够......。。例如，......因为......。最后，......。这意味着......

结尾段：

In conclusion，everything has both its merits and shortcomings. But from own point of view，你的看法...。Perhaps this is because of the simple fact that+从句...。Thus，I think that the advantages outweigh disadvantage. Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.

总而言之，万物都有它自己的优缺点。但是，依我之见，......也许是因为......。因此，我认为优点胜于缺点。我们只有以正确的方式去考虑，这事迟早会更好的。