大学英语四级写作指导二
写作素材:how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students
Teacher-student Relationship Is Never Complex
首段
开门见山,描述现象:师生关系成为近年热门话题
The relationship between teachers and students has been hotly discussed in recent years in China for more and more attention has been paid to education.
【...have{其他人称}/has{仅用于第三人称单数} been hotly discussed(......引起人热议);for由于;more and more attention has been paid to ...(人们对......越来越关注)】
切入主题:从学生角度给出自己的建议
Today I would like to share some tips on how to get along well with teachers from students’ perspective.
【share some tips on..(分享几条关于.......);get along well with...(与......和睦相处);from students’ perspective从学生的角度来看】
第二段
层次分明:First and foremost,...... Besides,....... Finally,......
First and foremost,students should leave a good first impression on your teacher.
【leave a good first impression on sb(给某人留下良好的第一映像)】
As the saying goes,well begun is half done.
【As the saying goes,...(常言道,......);well begun is half done.(良好的开端是成功的一半。)】
A good first impression is important for teachers to remember your name among your fellow students.
【among...(从......当中);fellow同类的、伙伴的;fellow students众多同学】
Besides,study hard and be active in class.
【be active表现积极;in class在课堂上】
A student who love study can definitely impress teachers deeply.
【impress sb deeply(让某人映像深刻);who love study{由who引导的定语从句来修饰student};A student who love study作主语】
Finally,keep contact with your teacher after class so that you could make friends with each other.
【keep contact with sb(与某人沟通);after class课下;...so that+从句...(......,以至于......)】
结尾段
给出结论:师生关系并不复杂
To conclude,teacher-student relationship is never complex if you could have an excellent academic performance,be cooperative in class or make friends with your teachers.
【To conclude,...(总而言之,......);have an excellent academic performance学业表现良好;academic performance学业;be cooperative积极配合;in class课堂上】