大学英语四级写作指导二

写作素材：how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students

Teacher-student Relationship Is Never Complex

 

首段

开门见山，描述现象：师生关系成为近年热门话题

The relationship between teachers and students has been hotly discussed in recent years in China for more and more attention has been paid to education.

【...have{其他人称}/has{仅用于第三人称单数} been hotly discussed（......引起人热议）；for由于；more and more attention has been paid to ...（人们对......越来越关注）】

切入主题：从学生角度给出自己的建议

Today I would like to share some tips on how to get along well with teachers from students’ perspective.

【share some tips on..（分享几条关于.......）；get along well with...（与......和睦相处）；from students’ perspective从学生的角度来看】

 

第二段

层次分明：First and foremost，...... Besides，....... Finally，......

First and foremost，students should leave a good first impression on your teacher.

【leave a good first impression on sb（给某人留下良好的第一映像）】

As the saying goes，well begun is half done.

【As the saying goes，...（常言道，......）；well begun is half done.（良好的开端是成功的一半。）】

A good first impression is important for teachers to remember your name among your fellow students.

【among...（从......当中）；fellow同类的、伙伴的；fellow students众多同学】

Besides，study hard and be active in class.

【be active表现积极；in class在课堂上】

A student who love study can definitely impress teachers deeply.

【impress sb deeply（让某人映像深刻）；who love study{由who引导的定语从句来修饰student}；A student who love study作主语】

Finally，keep contact with your teacher after class so that you could make friends with each other.

【keep contact with sb（与某人沟通）；after class课下；...so that+从句...（......，以至于......）】

 

结尾段

给出结论：师生关系并不复杂

To conclude，teacher-student relationship is never complex if you could have an excellent academic performance，be cooperative in class or make friends with your teachers.

【To conclude，...（总而言之，......）；have an excellent academic performance学业表现良好；academic performance学业；be cooperative积极配合；in class课堂上】