大学英语四级写作指导一
湛江雅托英语培训中心大学英语四级写作指导【一】
写作要素:How to best handle the relationship between doctors and paitients
Mutual Understanding Is Most Important
首段
1、开门见山,引出话题:医患关系负面新闻居多
Whe we talk about the relationship between doctors and paitients,what comes into my mind is generally negative news.
【what comes into+名词(进入......):引导名词性从句做主语;mind脑海】
2、表明观点:互相理解可以是医生与患者和谐相处
However,I believe there is a way for doctors and patients to get along harmoniously—that is mutual understanding.
【However,I believe +从句...(然而,我相信......);There is a way for sb to do sth某人是可以做某事;get along harmoniously和谐相处;破折号:—that is...(那就是靠......)】
第二段
层次分明:On the one hand,....... On the other hand,......
On the one hand,patients are helpless and worried when they go to hospital.
【be helpless无助的;be worrried忧虑的;be helpless and worried;help的形容词helpness;worry形容词worried;be+形容词作表语;】
So doctor’s attitude or response is critically important for them and their family.
【critically important至关重要;be+形容词作表语;critical关键的/至关的adj.--critically关键地/至关地adv.;副词修饰形容词、副词或动词;family家人】
On the other hand,doctors have to face so many patients every day that they even have no time to take a rest.
【so+形容词+名词+that+从句...(如此......,以至于......);从句的主语代替前面主语;从句的宾语代替前面的宾语;have no time to do sth没时间做某事;take a rest休息;face面对】
Such a high intensity of work could drive a man crazy.
【such+a+形容词+名词(这种......);high intensity of work高强度的工作;drive a man crazy把人逼疯;drive sb crazy把某人逼疯】
Thus,if they can stand in each other’s shoes,most problems could be solved.
【stand in each other’s shoes站在对方的立场上思考问题;stand in my shoes站在我立场上】
Otherwise,a doctor’s brief conclusion about the condition of patients might be regarded as cold blood and result on conflict.
【Otherwise,...(否则,......);brief conclusion简短结论;brief conclusion about...(对......的简短结论);the condition of...(......的情况);the condition of patients病情;might可能{推测};be regarded as...(被认为......);cold blood冷血;result in...(导致......)】
结尾段
Nowadays,much efforts has been made to ease the tension of doctor-patient relationship.
【much efforts has been made to do sth已经做出很多努力来做某事;ease缓和、减轻v.;doctor-patient医患adj.;the tension of...(......的矛盾)】
But I think the most effective one is mutual understanding and trust.
【one{代词}方法;the most effective way最有效的方式;mutual互相的adj.;understanding理解n.;trust信任n.】