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2019-12-08

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20051012日,举世瞩目的神舟六号载人飞船成功发射1018日,飞船顺利返航举国上下为之欢呼雀跃,世界各国媒体给予了极大的关注。请就此事写一篇英语短文,表达自己的高兴和骄傲之情

  1. 字数100左右。

  2. 可适当增加细节,使内容连贯。

  3. 生词提示:

载人的adj. manned 发射  v. / n. launch

神舟六号  Shenzhou VI 航空  n. aviation

 

Chinese second manned spaceship Shenzhou VI was launched successfully on October 12,2005 and returned to the earth on October 18.(表达:20051012日,举世瞩目的神舟六号载人飞船成功发射;1018日,飞船顺利返航)【被动语态:be+过去分词was launchedreturn to...(返回......)】

The six-day space trip is a great success to China and draws the attention of the media from all over the world.(表达:举国上下为之欢呼雀跃,世界各国媒体给予了极大的关注。)【space trip太空航行;six-day六天的(形容词修饰space trip);be a great success to...(对......来说是成功的);draw the attention of.........给予极大的关注);from all over the world世界各国(状语)】

Chinese people feel very pleased and cheer for that.(表达:表达自己的高兴和骄傲之情。)feel very pleased for that为那感到高兴;cheer欢呼;cheer for that为那欢呼【表达“高兴和骄傲之情”用:feel very pleased and cheer for that

As a student as well as a Chinese, I feel not only happy but also proud of this great achievement made in aviation.(表达自己的心理感受--重述:高兴和骄傲之情)As......【作为......来说,......】;as well as...=and【和】;not only...but also...【不仅......而且......;feel happy感到幸福;feel proud of...【为......感到骄傲/自豪】;be proud of...【为......自豪】;achievement成功n....made in aviation(过去分词当后置定语修饰achievement)【航空的......

I strongly believe that the development of Chinas aviation and future will be better and better.(写出自己的看法)I strongly believe that+宾语从句...【我坚信......】(引出自己的看法);the development of.........的发展】;future 未来;be better and better越来越好

As far as I am concernednow I must work hard so that I can make a contribution to our great nation.(再次表达自己的看法);As far as I am concerned...【依我之见,......】(引出自己的看法);work hard努力学习/努力工作;主句...so that+从句.........以致......】;make a contribution to...【为......作出贡献】;great伟大的adj.nation国家

 

写作思路:

第一句、第二句、第三句(根据中文提示,写出意思相近的句子)

第四句(表达自己的心理感受)

第五句(引出自己的看法)

第六句(再次写出自己的看法)

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