托福写作Choose life place 解释与范文
People have a choice of their living place，for example，some like to live in the country，and others prefer to live in a big city.
What is your choice—to live in the country or in a city？
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
首先陈述了居住在城市的利弊—居住在城市的利：交通的便利、休闲娱乐、受教育的机会和工作机会多；弊：污染问题和成本过高。
然后居住在乡下除了缺乏现代的居住设施和交通便利以外，还存在着很多好处—风景秀丽、空气清新、接近自然、生活安逸。
最后重申自己的看法，希望居住在一个小型城市中，可以同时享受居住在城市和乡下的便利。
Where would you like to live—in the countryside or in a large city？（首段：文章中心论点）
Many individuals appreciate the convenience of the city and I agree with them（论点一）. Firstly，cars，buses and subways in the city（主语） can take（take sb. to +地方—带某人去某地方[to 是介词后接名词，如果后接的是副词to就省略去]） you wherever（地方：无论任何地方） you want to go.（论据一[wherever you want to go—“你想去的地方”，名词性从句可做主语也可做宾语，但是在这做地点状语,名词性从句：what they said，whether they understand the animals]） Secondly，a great number of restaurants provide you with delicious and timesaving food. （论据二） Thirdly，for leisure time entertainment，folks have a choice of going to a cinema，a theatre，watching sports games and visiting museums and so on.（论据三） Finally，the fact that famous universities and modern factories are concentrated in a big city(定语从句来修饰the fact) means（谓语） that（that+从句） people have better education and more employment opportunities. （论据四） ---居住在城市的有点。However，fumes of cars and industrial wastes pollute the atmosphere. Moreover（与前句并列），overpopulation makes accommodation so difficult that（so…+adj.that…+句子：如此……以致……）the cost of living is very high.（论点二）---居住在城市的缺点。
此段陈述了居住在城市的利弊—居住在城市的利：交通的便利、休闲娱乐、受教育的机会和工作机会多；弊：污染问题和成本过高。
Even though there is a lack of modern housing facilities and advanced effective transport（乡村的缺点），the countryside is more attractive for its rural scenery（乡村的优点）. [（even though…，…：尽管……，但是……）论点三就是乡村的优点] Here you will find less pollution and fewer crowded streets or traffic problems. （论据五） Nothing could be compared with the pleasant songs of birds，the fragrance（芳香、香味）of flowers and the gorgeous sight of rising sun.（论据六） Just imagine the good lifestyle and the carefree feeling there： walking on a wild path，eating fresh vegetables and fruits and being close to nature all keep you healthy.（论据七）
此段陈述了居住在乡下除了缺乏现代的居住设施和交通便利以外，还存在着很多好处—风景秀丽、空气清新、接近自然、生活安逸。
Everyone can make a judgment in a particular way and have his/her own choice accordingly. I spent my childhood in a little and quiet village and that（并且） was really a very wonderful experience. So in my own opinion，to live in the countryside is my dream，but perhaps in real life I have to study and work in a modern city. However，if I have to choose one place to live in，I would like to live in a small town，which combines the advatages of both the countryside and the city.（非限定性定语从句）
此段为结论段：重申自己的看法，希望居住在一个小型城市中，可以同时享受居住在城市和乡下的便利。
Where would you like to live—in the countryside or in a large city?
Many individuals appreciate the convenience of the city and I agree with them. Firstly，cars，buses and subways in the city can take you wherever you want to go. Secondly，a great number of restaurants provide you with delicious and timesaving food. Thirdly，for leisure time entertainment，folks have a choice of going to a cinema，a theatre，watching sports games and visiting museums and so on. Finally，the fact that famous universities and modern factories are concentrated in a big city means that people have better education and more employment opportunities. However，fumes of cars and industrial wastes pollute the atmosphere. Moreover，overpopulation makes accommodation so difficult that the cost of living is very high.
Even though there is a lack of modern housing facilities and advanced effective transport，the countryside is more attractive for its rural scenery. Here you will find less pollution and fewer crowded streets or traffic problems. Nothing could be compared with the pleasant songs of birds，the fragrance of flowers and the gorgeous sight of rising sun. Just imagine the good lifestyle and the carefree feeling there： walking on a wild path，eating fresh vegetables and fruits and being close to nature all keep you healthy.
Everyone can make a judgment in a particular way and have his/her own choice accordingly. I spent my childhood in a little and quiet village and that was really a very wonderful experience. So in my own opinion，to live in the countryside is my dream，but perhaps in real life I have to study and work in a modern city. However，if I have to choose one place to live in，I would like to live in a small town，which combines the advatages of both the countryside and the city.
