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The government has announced that it plans to build a new courthouse in your area. Some people think it would be good for your community;others disagree. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of having a courthouse in your community.
政府决定在你居住的地区设立法院。在论述中有些人认为这对社区有利,但是有些人持法对意见。请讨论建立社区的利与弊。
首段:
背景信息:说明情况,解释为什么有利弊
—政府决定设立新法院
—利:解决就业,提供便利
—弊:犯罪因素随之进入社区
主题:陈述决定利弊的依据
第二段:利
—这一计划增加就业,如建筑、大楼维护、保安等
—律师和律师助手的住所条件便利
第三段:弊
—居民对那些即将审判的犯罪和为支持他们而来的同伴持反对态度
—担心罪犯被拘留是逃跑
—认为这一计划会将罪犯因素引入社区
结尾段:总结
—积极的:解决就业,提供便利
—消极的:存在犯罪因素
首段:
背景信息【使用题目考点词或词组造句】。Whenever people talk about…【主题】,their views will certainly differ from that+句子…【前者观点或一方观点(正方观点)】to that +句子…【后者观点或另一方观点(反方观点)】。This is a controversial issue,which often arouses contentious topics of discussion among people.
……。人们谈到……时,观点自然就会出现差异。有的人认为……,有的人认为……。这是一个有争议的问题,经常引起人们的热烈讨论。
范文:
A courthouse is an important installation in any area. Whenever people talk about a new courthouse that the government decides to build in the community,which will not be accepted without some protest and discussion,their views will certainly differ from that setting up a new courthouse will be as a source of employment and convenience to that it will bring undesirable people into the community. This is a controversial issue,which often arouses contentious topics of discussion among people.
不管在哪个地区,法院都是极其重要的。当人们谈到政府决定在社区建立法院时,这件事不经过抗议和讨论是不可接受的,观点自然会出现差异。有的人认为设立新法院会增加就业,并能够给居民提供便利。而另一些人则认为设立新法院会找来许多品行不良的人。这是一个有争议的问题,经常引起人们的热烈讨论。
第二段:
It is a bit understandable that the preference that+句子…prevails among a certain number of people due to the fact that+从句…。In addition,...
可以理解有的人赞同这样的理念,即……,因为……。此外,......。
范文:
It is a bit understandable that the preference that a courthouse will bring jobs to the area prevails among a certain number of people due to the fact that there will be construction work to be done for at least a year and there will be jobs in maintenance and security at the courthouse. In addition,lawyers and paralegals will find it convenient to live and work in this area,and those with legal matters to attend to at the courthouse will approve of location.
可以理解有的人赞同这样的理念,即法院会给该地区带来就业机会,由于至少一年内有许多建筑工作并且法院提供维护和保安工作。另外,律师和助理们会认为在此居住和工作比较方便,有事务要去法院办理的人也会赞成法院健在这里。
第三段:
However,there are numerous people who hold a different view concerning this case. They assert that 主语would be a tragedy of immeasurable proportions. It makes us feel +形容词if ...。For example,......。Furthermore,... This means that+从句。
然而,关于这件事,很多人持有不同的观点,他们认为……将会带来不可估量的悲剧。如果......,我们会感到......。例如,......。这意味着......。
范文:
However,there are numerous people who hold a different view concerning this case. They assert that it would be a tragedy of immeasurable proportions to set a new courthouse. It makes us feel worried if a new courthouse is built in the community. For example,the criminals will be moving around in the community and posing a threaten to the residents,especially if they escape from custody. Furthermore,there are criminals who come to support their friends and who might steal something while they are in the area. This means that the residents in the community are concerned about the criminal element the courthouse will attract.
然而,关于这件事,很多人持有不同的观点,他们认为建立新的法院将会带来不可估量的悲剧。如果在社区建立新的法院,我们会感到担忧。例如,犯罪分子将在这一地区走动,会给居民的正常生活造成影响,特别是当被拘留的罪犯逃跑时。另外,会有一些罪犯会来支持他们的同伙,并在社区进行偷盗。这意味着这些居民担心法院的设立可能会给社区带来犯罪因素。
结尾段:
In conclusion,there are two ways to look at the possibility of .... From my perspective,it can be a positive addition,+现在分词.... On the contrary,a negative can be brought is that+表语从句...
总而言之,如何看待可能......,现有两种观点。以我之见,......,这是积极的方面。相反正,带来消极的是......。
范文:
In conclusion,there are two ways to look at the possibility of a new courthouse in the community. From my perspective,it can be a positive addition,offering jobs and convenience. On the contrary,a negative can be brought is that it can be a place that attracts the kind of criminal element no neighborshood would welcome.
总而言之,如何看待可能在社区设新的法院,现有两种观点。以我之见,增加就业和提供便利,这是积极的方面。相反正,带来消极的是法院可能会成为找来没人喜欢的犯罪因素的场所。