雅思写作Task 1学习与分析

首段：

The two charts respectively illustrate statistical information concerning the tourists coming from Japan，who travelled abroad over a span of 10 years from 1985 to 1995 and the share in Australia on the tourist market in Japanese.

【The two charts respectively illustrate statistical information concerning...（两个图表分别展示了关于......的数据信息。）】

第二段：第一个图表

In terms of the bar chart，the numbers of Japanese tourists who traveled abroad experienced an abrupt increase from approximately 5 million in 1985 to 11 million in 1990. By 1991，Japanese tourists travelling abroad had declined slightly to about 10.5 million，while ascending dramatically to the peak at roughly 15 million by 1995. Obviously，the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad in 1985 was threefold more than that in 1995.

第三段：第二个图

According to the curve graph，Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market indicated an upward trend，whose percentage soared rapidly to nearly 4.8% in 1988，when those who travelled to Australia displayed a mid decrease to almost 4.2% in 1989，but a considerable growth，rocking to about 6.3% in 1993. However，the percentage had dropped a little to 6% by 1994.

结尾段：总结

It is clear from the data given that there were some significant differences in...

所以，根据已知数据我们可以看出......有着很大的不同。

It is clear from the data given that there were some significant differences in both Japanese tourists travelling abroad and Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market.

Although+从句...，...【尽管......，但是......】

...in +时间，when+从句...【......，那时......】

...in+地点，where+从句...【......，在那......】

...，while+从句...（...，while+动词ing...）【......，然而......】

...，but...（转折并列）【......，但是......】

...，which +谓语...【......，这......】

...，whose+名词+谓语...【......，......】

When a country develops its technology，the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion？

首段：改写题目+自己观点

With the development of the technology in a country，whether it is valued to try and keep them alive over the traditional skills and ways of life，both of which are dying out，has been existing the argument. However，from my perspective，I disagree with the opinion expressed，while beginning by pointing out that traditional skills and ways of life are not automatically of one country，but of a culture of community.

第二三段论述你自己的观点

第一论点+论据+解释

在喝多方面来看，文明的历史就是科技的历史：从火种的发现到车轮的发明再到当今因特网的发展，是我们一路走来并继续向前发展下去。一些科技可能带给我们的是负面影响，例如，给大众带来灾难的武器。而另一些科技如医学领域的进步正在积极的帮助人们或得更好、活得更长。所以，这很大程度上有易于保证我们原本的传统生活方式。当然，坑定没有人设法去保护那些所谓的传统方式，如以往在山洞里为传统生活方式。

第二论点

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结尾段：总结

总而言之，所有的科技都具有它必要的好处。所以我认为不管怎样，运用科技的手段努力保持传统的生命是绝不会毫无意义可言的。我们不应该忽视科技，因为它能够成为我们的朋友，而且支撑着我们生活方方面面。