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大学英语四级写作指导三

2021-10-02

写作素材:how to best handle the relationship between parents and children

Communication Is the best Gift for Parents

 

首段

引出话题:父母与子女的关系

The relationship between parents and children is eternal and universal topic for mankind.

for mankind(对人类而言);be eternal and universal topic(永恒由普遍的话题)

Our relationship with parents might be different at different ages.

might be different at different ages可能在不同年龄阶段有所不同

表明观点:对年轻人而言,这种关系取决于孩子的做法

And for young people at their 20sI think it will depend more on what children do.

young people at their 20s(二十几岁的年轻人);at their 20s二十几岁);depend more on...(更多取决于......);what children do孩子怎么做

 

第二段

承接上文解释原因

The reason why I say so is that as we grow upour parents who were our idols before gradually get old and even out-dated.

The reason why I say so is that+从句...(我们之所以这样说是因为......);as+从句...+主句...(随着............);before(以前)做时间状语;be our idols before(曾经被我们视为偶像);who were our idols before作定语从句来修饰parents来做主语;get old(老去);gradually(渐渐地);and even(甚至);get out-dated(落伍);gradually get old and even out-dated(渐渐地老去甚至落伍)

使用让步状语从句,论证观点

However hard efforts they makethey could not catch up with our stepsleading to the so-called invisible generation gap.

However hard efforts they make+主句...(不管他们怎么努力,......);catch up with our steps(跟上我们的脚步);.......leading to.........,从而导致......);so-called(所谓的);invisible(无形的);generation gap(代沟)

通过反面论证,进一步阐述理由

Thusif we cannot slow down our pacethere will definitely be an awkward silence between parents and uswhich is not rare now.

slow down our pace(放慢脚步);there will definitely be...(绝对产生......);...which+谓语.........,这......{非限定性定语从句来解释说明}

通过上述论证,使用as a result得出结论:年轻人应该多与父母交流

As a resultyoung people should talk more with parents to share our feelings and to understand each other better.

As a result+句子...(因此,......);talk more with sb to so sth(多与某人交流以做某事);feelings(感受)

 

结尾段

重申观点:经常与父母交流才能建立和谐的关系

Everyone wants loving parents who open and supportive.

loving慈爱的adj.open开放adj.supportive支持adj.be open and supportive开放和支持】

Only through frequent communication with themcan we establish such a harmonious relationship.

Only through+名词...+一般疑问句结构...(只要通过.............);frequent communication with sb(频繁的沟通交流){名词短语}establish建立v.such a...(这种......);harmonious和谐的adj.

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