雅思图表写作1

 

首段：改写

这两个饼状图分别显示了澳大利亚普通家庭能源消耗情况，以及使用这些能源产生的温室气体排放情况的数据信息。

The two pie charts respectively illustrate statistical information concerning how energy is consumed in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions that result from these energy consumption.

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结尾段：总结

根据以上提及的内容，我们可以轻易得得出这样的结论：在澳大利亚普通家庭，供暖和热水设备消耗了大多数能源，而温室气体则主要是由热水设备和其他家电排放的。From what has been mentioned above，we can easily come to the conclusion that most of energy are consumed by heating and water heating in an average Australian household，while the majority of greenhouse gas emissions gas are caused by water heating and other appliances.【From what has been mentioned above，we can easily come to the conclusion that +从句...，while the majority of ... are caused by ...（根据以上提及的内容，我们可以轻易得得出这样的结论：......，而......则主要是由......。）.】