雅思11Test1第一篇写作
第三段:
On the other hand,among the other four areas,agriculture always takes up the largest proportion of water consumption. To be specific,71% in South America,84% in Africa,88% in Central Asia,along with 81% in South East Asia consumed water for the need of agriculture.另一方面,在其余的四个地区中,农业用水占据了最大的比重。具体来讲,南美71%,非洲84%,中亚88%以及东南亚81%的是都用于农业需求。On the other hand,...(另一方面,......);Among...,...(在......中,......。);take up the largest proportion of...(占据了......最大的比重);To be specific,...(具体来讲,......。);A,B,C,along with D(A、B、C以及D)--并列;for the need of...(为......的需求)
In contrast,the proportion of industrial use is rather small in those four areas,with 10% in South America,7% in Africa,12% in South East Asia,and merely 5% in Central Asia.相反,这四个国家工业用水的比例却相当小:南美10%,非洲7%,东南亚12%以及中亚仅仅为5%。In contrast,...(相反,......。);the proportion of...(......的比例);be rather small相当小;...,with...(......,有......。)--介词作状语解释
The proportions of domestic use are all bellow 10% in Africa,Central Asia and South East Asia,with 9%,7% and 7% respectively.非洲、中亚和东南亚的家庭用水比例都低于10%,分别是9%、7%和7%。Be below 10%(低于10%);domestic use(家庭用水);...,with 9%,7% and 7% respectively(分别是/有9%、7%和7%)
Note that 19% of water in South America is used for domestic purpose.值得注意的是,南美的家庭用水占据了19%。Note that+从句...(值得注意的是,......。);be used for...(被用于......)
第四段:
To sum up,North America and Europe take industrial use of as the most important purpose,while other areas use a considerable proportion of water for agriculture.总而言之,北美和欧洲两地的工业用水是最为重要的目的。To sum up,...(总而言之,......。);take A as B(把A作为B);句子...,while+句子...。(......,而......。)
Domestic use is regarded as the least important purpose.家庭用水在用水目的上处于末尾位置。Be regarded as...(被看作为......); the least important...(最不重要的......);be regarded as the least important purpose(处于末尾目的)