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雅思大作文之犯罪话题

2019-10-29

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Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prisonso as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree

一些人认为犯罪分子应该更长时间被关押在监狱里,以便降低犯罪率。你同意这种观点吗?

 

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Recentlythere has been much controversy over whether to be given longer terms in prison for criminals or not. Howevermy personal view is that the criminals should be locked up in prison longerso as to reduce the rate of crimes as follow.

 

First and foremostthe government having a mercy to the criminalsthe public may suffer from a cruel life because the criminals such as thievesrobbersrapists or even murderers can pose threat to our society. When the crimes are in prisonit is improper or even dangerous to let the criminals out of jails.

 

Secondlywhat is worth noticing is that the longer imprisonment of criminals can deter the potential criminals. It is because the criminals are in dread of the severe punishment that the would-be criminals must think twice before they commit crimes. The longer imprisonment of criminals have got to reduce the crime rateto ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to those law-abiding citizens and to stop committing crimes again.

 

Although longer imprisonment of criminals can bring numerous advantageswe cannot overlook the fact that the government should provide some opportunities to begin their new life.  In other wordsthose criminals can be released in advance because of the the serious punishment of laws that they have ever experienced. But stilllocking the criminals in prison longer is more crucial for people.

 

In conclusioncriminals should be given longer terms in prisonwhich can receive compulsory reclaim. Only by this way can our society be safe and peaceful.

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