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【Advantages and disadvantages/positive and negative】

 

Nowadayssome workplace tend to employ equal numbers of men and women workers.

Do you think it is a positive or negative development

 

首段:

Recentlywork has been playing a significant role in the modern society. Howeverfrom my perspectivethe equal numbers of males and females who are employed in some workplace has sparked a wide range of intense controversies over the positive and negative impacts. 43

 

Recently...(主题:主语)has been playing a significant role in the modern society. Howeverfrom my perspective...(改写:主语)has sparked a wide range of intense controversies over over the positive and negative impacts

近年来,......一直扮演现代社会的重要角色。然而,关于积极和消极的影响,......引发了一连串激烈的争论。

 

第二段:优点

Obviouslythere are numerous advantages that are taken into consideration. First and foremostthe equal numbers of men and females can bring good work environment because they can cooperate together very well. For examplemales can be better than females in some fields like repairing computers and dealing with complexed math as they may have more strong logical thought. Secondlythe same numbers of females and males can balance the work conditionwhich can make a better choice on their work. For instancemany vital documents are handled better since they have to be solved carefully and patiently by females. Ultimatelyit is crucial for the equal numbers of men and women to work in groups.This means that males and females are supplementary to each other in the field of work. 131

 

Obviouslythere are numerous advantages that are taken into consideration. First and foremost...because+从句...For example...as+从句...Secondly...which can...For instance...since+从句...Ultimately...This means that+从句...

明显的是,有很多优点。首先,......因为......。例如,......因为......。其次,......,这能够......。。例如,......因为......。最后,......。这意味着......

 

第三段:缺点

Although these benefit a lotwe cannot overlook the drawbacks that such a way of employment namely equal nembers of men and women may impact on the economic development of the society. The main reason is that it could affect the work efficiency. Given that female fail to undertake too much work in physical workand given that the speed slows due to the worktoo many females can bring shortcoming on the process of the society. In the second placefemales can work better on the occupation such as communication than males in that they naturally possess the appetency. In other wordsmale cannot acquire benifits as soon as possible in the negotiation. Lastlythe division of labor must be clear and exact. This cannot ignore the purpose whose reason is the special skills between men and women are different. 141

 

Although these benefit a lotwe cannot overlook the drawbacks that+从句...The main reason is that+从句...Given that+从句...and given that+从句...+主句...In the second place...in that+从句...In other words...such as+名词...Lastly...This cannot ignore the purpose whose reason is ...

尽管这些有很多好处,但是我们也不能忽视的缺点是......主要的原因是......。考虑到......并考虑到......,从而......。其次,......因为......。换句话说,......例如......。最后......。这也不能忽视的主要原因是......

 

结尾段

In conclusioneverything has both its merits and shortcomings. But from own point of viewmales and females should be considered as the balance when the company employ staffexcept the special work such as physical job. Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.50

 

In conclusioneverything has both its merits and shortcomings. But from own point of view...Only in the right way can we make it better sooner or later.

总而言之,万物都有它自己的优缺点。但是,以我之见,......我们只有以正确的方式去考虑,这事迟早会更好的。

 

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