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2019-08-27

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Unemployment is becoming increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to receive primary educationwhile others think secondary education is necessary. Whats your opinion

首段:

世界经济形势因广泛蔓延的危机而变得不容乐观。很多国家的事业率持续攀升。有人认为学生只需要接受初等教育即可,还有人认为中的能教育是必要的。依我之见,教育不是事业的催化剂。相反,教育可能会还会对事业起到抑制作用。

Economic situation is not optimistic all over the world because of widespread crisis. Unemployment rate keeps surging in many countries. Some people assert that it is only required for students to receive primary schoolwhile others argue that it is necessary that students receive secondary education. From my perspectiveeducation is not a catalyst to unemployment. On the contraryeducation can be restrainer to it.

思路:

With the rapid development in the modern society where we live...have/has been play a significant/unoptimistic role(背景)。Some people assert that+句子...(改写第一的观点),while others argue that+句子...(改写第二的观点)。From my perspective...(自己看法)。

【随着现代社会的发展,...扮演重要的/不乐观的角色。有的人认为......,而有的人认为......。依我之见,......。】

 

第二段:

有些人认为接受更多的教育对那些因为失业一直都很困难的家庭来说是一个经济负担,让年轻人立即工作可以缓解困境。只有那些目光短浅的人才会持这种观点。我们应该分析一下失业的原因。人们失业不是因为他们受过良好的教育,而是由于能力不够。提高能力最好的有效方法就是接受教育。经济负担只是暂时的困难。接受良好教育的人可以避免他们的下岗命运。

First of allsopme people think that more education is a financial burden to the family which is always hard because of unemploymentand leting youngsters work immediately would better the miserable situation. Only short-sighted people hold this kind of view. We should analyze what is the cause of losing jobs. People are out of work not because they are well-education but because they are incapable. Moreoverthe effective way to improve their capability is education. Financial burden is a temporary difficulty. Well-education people can avoid their fate of being laid-off.

思路:

First of all+句子...because+句子...In other words+句子...as+句子...And+句子...since+句子...This means that+句子...

【首先,......,因为......。换句话说,......,因为......。而......,因为......。这意味着......。】

 

第三段:理由

接受良好教育的人为社会所需。无知的人只适合做简单的工作,而具备知识技能的人可以创造出比前者多十几倍的财富。很多领域都在使用新技术,一个人参加工作签掌握这些技能是必要的。仅接受初等教育的人显然不具备相应的资质。

Secondlywell-education people are needed by our society. An ignorant people can only be fit for simple workwhile a knowledge man may create ten times ore wealth than the former. New technologies are used in many areasand mastering them is a necessity before one works. And one with only primary education will certainly not be qualified.

思路:

Secondly+句子...in that+句子...If+句子...+句子...More importantly...which can...

【其次,......,因为......。如果............。更重要的是,......,这能够......

 

第四段:理由

目前地科技需要改革和创新,这也需要具备高知识水平的人来完成。生产力的进步通常依赖于新技术。同时,先进的生产力又能促进财富的增长,从而市社会福利变得更好,人们也就不会再为失业后的生存问题发愁。而这些光明的前景考更好的教育才能达到。

Ultimatelythe current science and technology need to be innovated and renovatedwhich requires those with more education to finish. Productivity forces are always improved by new technologies. Furthemoreadvanced productive forces will create more wealthso that social welfare will be better. No on will worry about what to live on after losing jobs. And this prosperous future can only result from more education.

思路:

Ultimately+句子...so that+句子...For examplewhen+句子...+句子...because of+名词...It is undoubted that+句子...due to+名词...

【最后,......以致......。例如,当......时候,......,由于......。毫无疑问的的是,......由于......。】

 

结尾段:

通过上面的比较和对比,任何人都能把握地得出结论:中等能教育不是一种选择而是一种必须。失业永远不应该成为拒绝中等教育的借口。

From the above comparison and contrastanyone can safely conclude that secondary education is not a choice but a must. What is moreunemployment should never become an excuse to reject secondary education.

思路:

From the above comparison and contrastanyone can safely conclude that+句子...Although......Only in the waycan we+动词...

【通过上面的比较和对比,任何人都把握地得出结论:......。尽管.......,但是......。只有以这种方式,我们才能够......。】

 

作业:

The number of cars keeps increasingso road systems should be expended. Some people think the cost of road should be paid by the governmentwhile other people think the car owners should play it. What is your opinion

轿车数量逐渐增加,因此,公路系统需要扩建。一些人认为政府应该为此买单,而另一些人认为汽车的拥有者应该为此买单。你的观点是什么?

 

With the rapid development in the modern society where we liveexpending road system has been play a significant role. Some people assert that the government should pay the cost of roadwhile others argue that the car owners must be responsible for the cost of road.From my perspective both of them should pay the cost of road.58

 

First of allit is beneficial to be paid for the cost of road by the government because car owners are easy to be controlled. In other wordsit is good for people that the government invest money to expend the road systemas people do not need pay more money beyond themselves.And we cannot ignore fact that the car owners pay the cost of the road since the government can reduce the financial pressure .This means that people and the government can make an effort to create good road system expanding.92

 

Secondlyit is not struggled that the government need to enlarge the road system at any time in that the government owns adequate economy and the force for building the road. If car owners pay the cost of road systemthe government need long time to coordinate capital to broaden the road system. More importantlythe government and car owners pay it togetherwhich can make car owners understand how to protect the road system and to obey the law of the traffic.83

 

From the above comparison and contrastanyone can safely conclude that the government and car owners should pay the cost of road expanding together. Although it is hard for the enlarging road system to charge for car ownersit is also the car owners responsibility that it is unavoidable. Only in this waycan we get the comfortable and enlarged road to drive on roads. 65

 

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