大学英语四级写作讲解双方写作

Direction：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on Students’ Running Online Shops. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

 

1、   很多大学生在业余时间开网店赚钱

 

2、   有人支持，有人反对

 

3、   我的看法

 

 

Recently，with the development of the modern society，…【主题】has been playing a significant role. Some people think that …【一方观点】.First and foremost，…【支持第一方观点1】. Secondly，…【支持第一方观点2】. Ultimately，…【支持第一方观点3】.

 

翻译：几年来，随着现代社会的发展，……一直扮演重要的角色。一些人认为……。首先，……。其次，……。最终……。

 

However，there are also many people who strongly advocate that …【第二方观点】. For one thing，…【支持第二方观点1】. For another，…【支持第二方观点2】. In addition，…【支持第三方观点3】.

 

翻译：然而，也有很多人强烈呼吁……。首先，……。另一点，……。另外，……。

 

From my perspective，although…，we cannot ignore+名词. Only in a rational way can we make it better sooner or later.

 

翻译：以我之见，尽管……，但是我们不能忽视……。只有以恰当的方式去进行考虑，事情迟早会好转的。

 

on Students’ Running Online Shops

 

Recently，with the rapid development of the modern society，students’ running online shops has been playing a significant role. Therefore，many college students run only online shops.

 

Some people assert by doing so，students can gain not only some money to reduce the financial burden for their family，but also precious experience of setting up a business. However，others strongly take the view that students’ running online shops will bring some negative effects.The factor that must be taken into consideration is that running online shops definitely distract students from their primary task.

 

From my perspective，although running online shops for college students can bring them more benefits，we cannot ignore many drawbacks.  Only in a rational way can we make it better sooner or later.