招生电话:0759-2296349     网址:www.zjielts.com

地址:湛江市霞山区海滨大道南52号和平大厦A座5楼503室(金祥花园对面,供电大厦与后海名门之间,旧南粤银行楼上)

首页

新闻中心

考博英语写作之:现在学生掌握的知识是否比过去的学生少

2019-08-15

image

 

88

题目:Quite a few teachers complain about students reading fewer books than before. In fact,students nowadays spend more time surfing on the Internet and watching movies on DVD’s. Naturally they spend less time reading books. Do you think that students today are less knowledge because they read fewer books?

 

Are the students today less knowledge?

首段:背景(改写)+自己的看法+引入下文

Students nowadays spend more time surfing on the Internet and watching movies on DVD’s,so many teachers complain that students read fewer books than  before. From my perspective,students today are still knowledgeable although they read fewer books. I have some arguments to support my view.

 

第二段:支持你自己的观点并给出理由【论点+论据+论据】

First and foremost,students are getting closer to computer and DVD and they do learn numerous things. The reason is that resources on the Internet are so abundant that students can search for everything that they need. Without teachers’ help,the students today can also solve many problems on their study via using Internet.

 

第三段:支持你自己的观点并给出理由【论点+论据+论据】

Secondly,it is not enough for students to merely learn from books because the society develops rather rapidly. Clearly,the message on the internet is timely and up to date,which ensures that the students not only acquire the knowledge they have learnt in the school but also know what happens in the world.

 

第四段:支持你自己的观点并给出理由【论点+论据+论据】

Ultimately,the Internet exhibits multi-cultural background of the world to understand it will facilitate the students’ participating in global competition in the future. However,there is also much bad information on the Internet. Students need to choose the helpful information.

 

结尾段:总结概括

To sum up,there is no question in my mind that students today get much more knowledge than they did in the past in virtue of the Internet.

 

思路

首段:

背景...。From my perspective,...。I have some arguments to support my view.

 

第一段:

First and foremost,...。 The reason is that+从句...。...。 

 

第二段:

Secondly,...。Clearly,...,which ensures that+从句...。

 

第三段:

Ultimately,...。 However,...。

 

结尾段:

To sum up,there is no question in my mind that +从句...

image

 

88

微信图片_20190810111907

微信图片_20190810111533

微信图片_20190810111540

这里有最新的公司动态,这里有最新的网站设计、移动端设计、网页相关内容与你分享